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One of those daze
By Ashteroth
It's been one of those days
a dreary daze
in truth one of those
weeks
my hazy brain's
up in a craze
5 days with 8 hours
sleep
'Cause I'm out of medication
and I'm slurring
all my speech
I'm in the wrong direction
now I can not find
my keys-
OR my fricken phone
but finding it should be a cinch
when I called it from my home
I heard my ringtone in the fridge
O.o
Well I'll be.... Now frankly
I do
not give a shit
I'm sick of running into doorways
with my shoulders
and my hips
Suddenly.... It struck me
I am a tired man
my coffee's overflowing
and the keys were
in my hand
So it's been one of those nights
nose hair
ignites
I light another smoke
my face screws tight
smoke
in my eyes
sip of coffee makes me choke
Curse it out
of sheer frustration
salt n sugar were to close
remake with
hesitation...
Nah, I might just stick to Coke
and now where's
my bloody wallet
...seems I'd washed it with my coat
took it
out and then forgot it
until 2Ks up the road. :/
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© 2009 Ashteroth
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A former member wrote:
feel like i wee caught on cctv,.... im such a scatter-brain i near forgot to comment,.... a day in the life... -wicked job mate.
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On Monday, February 16, 2009, D3ADT0WN
(186)
wrote:
very very great. another nice work from you, thank you for sharing -jnn
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful! and ohh damn ! hahaha! ya better just go back to bed and start over! the elves were playin' tricks! haha great write , i have related to this before (smiling)loved it !
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A former member wrote:
Dig the sing-song lyrical quality in this.
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On Friday, January 30, 2009, openureyes
(56) wrote:
ahh something familiar. nice one ;)
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A former member wrote:
I loved this. ~ hdb
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
Strangely enough I love the feeling, just drifting through the day seemingly barely awake. Read made for a nice ride
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