Comments by All Members
- "You painted a truly vivid picture in this one. It was hard not to put yourserlf in the piece, and by hte time I got to "And all I really want to do
is stand up with a clean heart and empty stomach,
wipe my mouth,find my way home,
and write something beautiful" I couldn't help but feel so empathetic and felt like I needed the cleansing too. This was truly engaging, exquisitely done."
Posted by surething on "A drunken rant about heartbreak,vomiting,and an answer to "A"." by estherbell
- "this was felt stripped of vanities, beautiful in its humility. this was wondrefully done with such a humbling tone"
Posted by surething on "Hospital bed" by estherbell
- "This has such beautiful and unusual imagery, I really enjoyed reading this, particularly "Wearing black suede
and a fresh crimson heartbreak
on a silk bow tie. " "
Posted by Lylani on "A clumsy simple confession " by estherbell
- "(I am still lost for words, or do not dare to speak) Made me pause a little, like I should not read on, very effective. I am glad you posted this, it is so honest and a beautiful piece."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "A clumsy simple confession " by estherbell
- "Lovely, eloquent write. It certainly does have a "yesteryear" feel. Exquisite imagery. I too like the crayon stanza. "drawing dreamworlds,weaving images of having you in cafes
with tea, and maybe some scones--is my favorite part, love the word play."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "A clumsy simple confession " by estherbell
- "this is like a gothic victoriana painting...slightly raphealesque...like a Waterhouse indulgent.- -- beautifully rendered and captivated. love the crayon strophe. +ness"
Posted by Unknown on "A clumsy simple confession " by estherbell
- "lol...you can tug at my heart anytime with your poetry...your writing is so very beautiful and only someone with a cold heart would not be able to feel the emotions that you write with. When I can be pulled into the poet's heart and feel what they want the reader to feel or experience...then I know it is truly an exquisite write. So it is not you that should be saying thank you, but I...Thank you! ~Lavenia"
Posted by Lavenia on "The chemistry of pain" by estherbell
- "You have tugged at my heart one time, too many already my lady, and this time you pulled the pain from deep within...heartbreaking beautiful write...~Lavenia"
Posted by Lavenia on "The chemistry of pain" by estherbell
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