Comments by All Members
- "A tear for every hrain of sand on the beach... This has the beauty of the comming tide, and the heart break of a sand castle lost. I always enjoy your posts... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "captivity" by Lylani
- "Oh wow! The steel indifferance in this really sums up the anger; which really sums up the pain. Not so much like the writes you usually post, but surely worth reading, and reading into. Well done, lady... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "One year on" by Lylani
- "A superbly stated admonishment and profession of what went before, yet possibly lost in times passed - but then some thing cannot be forgotten, or forgiven. Srongly said, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "One year on" by Lylani
- "Damn. You have been to that place aswell... And you've made me remember it all too well.. It's good to hear of you again... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Petroleum Tears" by Lylani
- "The staggered rythem of this really drives home the feeling of thoughts and emotions coming from every angle; being stifled by sheer will. It's like trying to fight hornets with your fists... Gaah.. I never feel like my comments do your words justice... But I somehow ALWAYS feel your words... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "No Paper Flowers" by Lylani
- "fuck me!! this is insanely beautifully romantic!! Damnn you for writing this!! I am jealous...I wish I was the one who had penned this piece...it's a profound reflection of the the most beautiful words that jointly form the magical sentence...mannn!!! I bow down in respect and admiration...."
Posted by Unknown on "Know" by Lylani
- "This is more beautiful than any comment I could leave would be worthy of.. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Know" by Lylani
- "This Is Breathtakingly Romantic, I Love It. Good Write Hun!"
Posted by Chaos God on "Know" by Lylani
- "I have read through many of your writings and I have to say this has to be one of my faves ;) Your writing is style is one of a kind!! Keep doing it (=
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Posted by Cattarax on "pathological lover" by Lylani
- "Pre-ordained has really got me thinking on this, something genetic perhaps? This was so sad and hopeless, being lied to because you almost expect it perhaps? Probably guessing badly, thanks, and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Lies" by Lylani
- "You should live in Ohio, so I could bring you flowers, and take you out for dinner... Again you give perfect discription of emotion in script. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Lies" by Lylani
- "Heartbreaking and bitter in self awareness and reflection. I love your description and the structure works beautifully. Thank you for posting!"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Lies" by Lylani
- "this portrait you painted with words reminds me too well why i decided to give up on most people. a beautiful write though"
Posted by Unknown on "Lies" by Lylani
- "Oh to be so lucky, as your muse. Another beautiful work. You never dissapoint. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Selfless" by Lylani
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