Comments by All Members
- "oh i love this! Extreamly insightful and deep thoughts expressed within. I love to see raw power in poetry. Unabashed sensativity and shameless truth. "
Posted by Unknown on "One Thing Leads From Another" by AdrianJ
- "i liked this....in a way it reminded me of a piece in my works called "Normal Is A Setting On Your Dryer""
Posted by Unknown on "Conformalcy" by AdrianJ
- "Flawed, vindictive, vicious, jealous, petty, arrogant, stubborn, self-destructive nature and all..."
Posted by AdrianJ on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "It's imaginary reality, if you will...When I fall in love with someone, I want to know their soul. I used to think that it was a measure of self-providence, collecting weaknesses to use at a later time when things are not as tranquil now. However, for some odd reason, I am disarmed by this creature and find her ever-fascinating..."
Posted by AdrianJ on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "I think this is a prose that everybody can relate to be it male or female we know we truely love someone when they make us soooooooo crazy we want to pull out our hair and yet we know we couldn't live with out their annoying habits in our lives."
Posted by Unknown on "Can Love and Hate Be Combined into a Greater Whole? " by AdrianJ
- "The last four lines. That's the heart and soul of this one, for me anyway. Beautifully composed."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "Unless this is pure imagination, I see what you think of her from your words. I am glad that you have her, and I hope she knows she is blessed with heart-love. Not everyone gets more than need-love.
The old saying is somewhat inaccurate. I believe beauty is in the HEART of the beholder.
Nice word picture."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "'...Fortunes are made in this nation on the infiltration of the mediocre minds...' haha... words should come with a 'consumer beware' warning. always check knowledge.... for wisdoms receipt. pile on."
Posted by elisa on "Composed Comprehension" by AdrianJ
- "Agreed. Economy serves better here. Did some re-stylizing for clarity as well as aesthetics. Note: powerful sleeping drugs and poetic thought don't mix - the drugs end up being rendered useless by the relentless."
Posted by AdrianJ on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "an unusual angle on an age-worn topic; some of the rhetoric I found a touch...unneccesary? Such as the "semi-colons" and the 'parenthetical' line which was tough to chew, perhaps shorter line breaks might have helped? However, technically it's not my bag but I liked the imagination behind it, regardless..Col :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Dream Souls" by AdrianJ
- "Yes, sometimes grouping, and "loving", requires some sacrifices of freedoms, but not freedom as a whole. It's still a choice whether or not to group or not... although most do more out of a mix of mutual benefit mixed with fear. Grouping has never indicated a lack of free will, IMO."
Posted by Sketso on "False freedoms, Holy Cheats and Formal Lies to Tyrannize" by AdrianJ
- "LOL. Where the did you get me saying that? And even if I did, man. I don't have a fucking clue what god is. I can make assumptions, based on my opinions, which is all any of us can do. I said nothing. All I did was offer "maybe"s. I honestly think that if there is an afterlife at all, it's far more complicated, and far-reaching then any one still trapped in the flesh could ever even begin to compute."
Posted by Alanarchy on "False freedoms, Holy Cheats and Formal Lies to Tyrannize" by AdrianJ
- "Some WANT religion. Other's don't. Still other's feel the need to bash what they don't understand. I had a religious friend who once asked me if I went to church. I said no, I stay spiritual in other ways. He told me, "well that's fine. I go to church, because it makes me feel better. I mean, you don't go to a hospital if you aren't sick, right.""
Posted by Alanarchy on "False freedoms, Holy Cheats and Formal Lies to Tyrannize" by AdrianJ
- "And by the way, I start this piece debunking the theory...I just don't believe that you adequately nullified with your hubriac dismissal of the invisible hand...(the invisible hand - that's a good one - like the market)"
Posted by AdrianJ on "Imprints" by AdrianJ
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