Diulay No More, Do it Your Own Way

By AdrianJ

Heart Opposes Sense
The Soul Assails Prudence
Brain Mushed Drowned in Why
Blunder Seems Assured
But Only one thing in the Universe
Can Defeat Failure - A Good, Honest, Try...

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© 2008 AdrianJ
Published on Sunday, June 15, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • demonicus On Monday, June 16, 2008, demonicus (26)By person wrote:

    simplistic duality masked in mindless chaos.

  • AdrianJ On Friday, June 20, 2008, AdrianJ (34)By person wrote:

    Thanks?

  • A former member wrote: you only fail when you stop trying to suceed.... good write. I like the simplicity :)

  • Dark Wing On Sunday, June 15, 2008, Dark Wing (51)By person wrote:

    you couldnt have said it better, this is truth no dening it, good work ~Crow

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