Thoughts that Can't Possibly Exist

By Withering petals

Silicon dreams
Of interpreting themes
In poetry that doesn’t exist

Shattered glass
Under a fist
Of a soul just confessed
Laying naked
on the breasts
of a girl who doesn’t exist

Spasmodic beams of an electric tease
that makes you hold your breath
For the 100th wonder of a world
that still doesn’t exist

Creating a meth –
Ode
To be systematically sold
To those who can virtually undress
Their souls before a blank page
In spasmodic moments of rage
With the clear cut ability to confess
In admission to crimes that can’t exist.


Filling our minds
From time to time
With thought that
don't....
still....
can’t ...
possibly exist.

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© 2008 downstream
Published on Monday, June 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • tonebone On Tuesday, July 14, 2020, tonebone (58)By person wrote:

    this was a considerable push to existence of thoughts that can't possibly exist, therefore promoting you to minor diety and fast on the heels of full fledged god...LOL....excellent!

  • AbbyMetallica On Sunday, July 5, 2020, AbbyMetallica (20)By person wrote:

    Absolutely mesmerizing. I felt drawn to the slick flow of your work and have kept coming back since I first saw it. Congratulations. ~AbbyMetallica

  • A former member wrote: This little sucker nearly slipped by, smooth flow,gr8 thoughts and constructed to a tea with points that all "exist"...xcellent write

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, June 11, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (114)By person wrote:

    very lovely work. You give words here, to something that I havent seen written before. I like it. -Heather-

  • A former member wrote: Filling our minds From time to time With thought that don't.... still.... can�t ... possibly exist. ........................I love this last part especially.... I like your work.I'll be keeping my eyes open for more from you ~RAIN~

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, June 9, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1288)By person wrote:

    Good one. I felt drawn to it

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