Comments by All Members
- "Well done, I love the tie in with the shot-gun, brilliant. The flow was great, thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "Anyone would be so lucky to have that passion and love directed at them. You have a deep sense of self that allows you to intensly love and share all of you. Lucky is the lady that steals your heart, then keeps it for a lifetime. Amazing write Aleas. Amazing. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Of You." by Aleas
- "I love the theme throughout. Wanting to find something that was left in childhood, or some piece of happiness that was so easily captured then? Hmmm... I loved this. Every word. How great that you could use "pffft" and make it work! =)"
Posted by Unknown on "I, Now, Then." by Aleas
- "Damn man this was chaotic I felt like I walked into the middle of a back alley brawl while trying to take a stroll on your memory lane. Fantastic visuals you wove throughout. Very well done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "well i wasn't expecting that last stanza. What a piece. Amazing description and great ending."
Posted by RubyXero on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "I have no words to do this justice. How you get here, I don't know but your lines dig and your meaning is beyond what my heart can comprehend. I love it..."
Posted by Unknown on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "gawds, that's feverish and instantly immediately. . .. . loving."
Posted by Unknown on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "Your welcome. Your an amazing writer, and this whole peice is visualy stunning.
P.S I told you onslaught was a fun word."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Salvo." by Aleas
- "wow , well written and captivating every ounce of attention span i had .thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "firstly, never apologise for the outpouring of meaning; secondly........well i dun really have a second. jsut a silenced mind and a quivering lower lip."
Posted by Unknown on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "again and again, im finding your words a respite; a reminder of what life should be; a place where the hurt feels almost good, or at least a reflective refracting measure of my heart------ -and what would i be without my hurt? less? more? easier? harder?. . .. . thank you for writing. it softens me."
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas
- "the whole piece was fantastic...I didn't want it to sound like it wasn't..its just those lines hit me the hardest...Im still feeling them..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "I think it was all said in those last two lines...bam! and damn!...Ive missed your writing."
Posted by Narcissa on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "This tugged me along as though I was helpless to its will. A beautifully crushing piece and I can appreciate the sentiment throughout. You have a wonderful way with words. *tips hat*"
Posted by Dilated View on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "You carried me slowly trough the story unveiling layer by layer to unveil it's complexity and simplicity at the same time. Great imagery."
Posted by Unknown on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "This was truly genious. You brought me through this story and left me still wanting more. I am impressed, if not envious of your skill and ability to use it. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "I've always been a big fan of spoken word; there's nothing but truth and power to this."
Posted by Unknown on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "how is it that i can read your whole write, right up until the last few lines, and then-----your words read ME. and every emotion cries forth. you are some kind of masterful."
Posted by Unknown on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "this....you..just completely ripped my heart out. although sometimes i wonder if death stops anything////... . i tend to hope it certainly CANNOT stop love."
Posted by Unknown on "The Hint I Missed." by Aleas
- "Beautiful and crushing. The second to last stanza really blew me away, very much enjoyed your word usage throughout. Excellent read, thank you for sharing."
Posted by Dilated View on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "This ripped me apart on the molecular level. Has a very frozen in time feel to it and seems like a nice place to get lost in. But like you said in the last two lines.. well you know. Nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "Excellent flow and excellent content. I enjoyed following your thought process and how it built up a nervousness that at the end was shattered with a simple question. Very nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Along the Way." by Aleas
- "Where do your words come from? I read a several of your works and was amazed over and over. I look forward to reading your heart... you let it out so passionately. Thank you for sharing so much of yourself."
Posted by Unknown on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas
- "you're an out[cast]standing poet,.... so much intel,... so much to tell...im going to leave it at that but if i end up in the states i hope to catch up with you.... your brain is so far from slim pickings."
Posted by Unknown on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas
- "youve taken such a pain and inner loss inside you and put such an elegant literary face to it, this is often difficult to do when dealing with such personal topics, however it was exquisite"
Posted by surething on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
- "Its good to see you post again...and though this piece is so personal it sticks to my bones cause I carried it around with me all day yesterday when I first read it..."
Posted by Narcissa on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas
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