Comments by All Members
- "I call it "Heavens Peak"... ;). I agree with both guys... another piece Ill love to ponder from a talented poet. I can't stop reading this...There isn't a line here that doesn't speak to me on a personal level...and I am thrilled that the picture spoke to you as it did me."
Posted by Narcissa on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed." by Aleas
- "I think you have a great control of the words here, non-pretentious with a hint of swaying rhythm, well combined with your thoughts, bleak and existential-like, but with enough offbeatness to provide a few original sounding lines....you're one of the more understated talents on offer here, in amongst the false diamonds....bravo, well mined!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed." by Aleas
- "Ah, but there is still always a choice at the bottom of that ladder. Do I climb it yet again? Smiling torment, self torture? How Matrix-esque. Plug me in. I love steak, too."
Posted by Aleas on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "Your writes are striking chords with me recently, friend. But I add, purely from my perspective, that escape leads back to the ladder, there is no running from the fire... we burn in smiling torment."
Posted by Sketso on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- ""A life time of collective sighs severed ties Elicit lies and exit signs" you can bring that word play till the cows come home, really well felt write mate."
Posted by Unknown on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "In the last stanza I felt that everything depends in that one breath...since at any given moment anything can happen...You have my chest tied in knots."
Posted by Narcissa on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "...don't laugh, but I can imagine this being read with peaceful orchestral music, and the ever mournful whale-song, in the background. Unbelievably beautiful, fitting perfectly to what I've been trying to write, myself, for so long..."
Posted by Sketso on "Undertow (Drown Me Now)." by Aleas
- "Had to come back again...& again, this is so real that I had to clear the room so that i may experience the whole 100%, it deserves nothing less...*hurts."
Posted by Unknown on "Undertow (Drown Me Now)." by Aleas
- "I agree w/After Hours...I was so lost in the romance, the love that I lost it when I read the end...Never let moments like this slip. Never."
Posted by Narcissa on "Of You." by Aleas
- "therapeutic for you i think, lovely poem, your note at the end brought it into context. thanks for sharing "
Posted by meadowlea on "Of You." by Aleas
- "Fuck mate, i were sooo into - what you had going on with your 'other' and the reality just 'tore it away' like a cruel CUN*, I hate that word as much as i hated falling for the beginning...and being destroyed by the end, I don't know what to say............."
Posted by Unknown on "Of You." by Aleas
- "This is gorgeous and yearning, a lovely tribute, with the most tragic of endings. I'm sure you will be together again, someday. But, until then, "don't let go.""
Posted by Unknown on "Of You." by Aleas
- "In some way this sounds as if having been written when being high - just everything coming from and going to nowhere... But while doing so, it REALLY makes one think. Great."
Posted by Any on "I, Now, Then." by Aleas
- "Absolutely stunning. I especially loved the 3rd stanza. Thank you for sharing this with us."
Posted by soul dancer on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
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