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- ""And I can't hold anything anymore
I'm so full of empty" ....damn those 2 lines spoke to me so much. You write these heartbreakingly beautiful poems but the last few lines always manage to be the cherry on the perfect poetic sundae. Love it, although it hurts to read a poem so full of pain."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "If wishes were trees..." by Narcissa
- "even after all this time this still makes me murmur under breath, makes me whisper. cry. beautiful if only too heartbreaking. but the good things sometimes are. "
Posted by Vulture on "still. born" by Narcissa
- "I agree with this guy ;) he sounds familiar. Just as back then, the sentiment here is binding in it's sincerity and effectiveness. An example of poetry I can defend as such and recommend for the content. Thank you, it is a shame your words are not as prevalent as they once were around here. Hope you are well, ms Narcissa. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- ""to move him as he moved me" roughly quoted, haha.... a fabulous expression of empathy, of love... I really wish you'd return and grace us with more of your words, Ms. Hope all is well with you and yours.... oh, and you should return just to remove that 'a' from the last line... hehe, poetess. *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "They Called Him A Poet" by Narcissa
- "I came back to read a few of my favorite poets in an effort to inspire myself to write again. This reminds me I obviously have a long road back.... I love how your words surprise me yet fit together beautifully. Love it"
Posted by Unknown on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "this was...well it gave me the shivers, not entirely ina good way. The words are so profound, the stained cloth, the angels - the title....eye ballerinas....thios was like a massive rabbit punch to the brain and the emotive areas....the nail part made me cringe too...the pain here is almost too much to bear. But the poem is amazingly conceived....jeez!"
Posted by stryder on "still. born" by Narcissa
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