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- "And what have you written now? They are only hearts. You've written them down and now they are beating in my eyes, thumping in my brain. What a gentle penning this is, which I find unusual for you...but, then again, you are different, aren't you? "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Sex Tides and Cosmic Dust " by Rebel tiGer King
- "The spelling of 'thru' creates a visual rhyme with 'urn'--a highly effective literary device that is seldom used. "Picket lashes" denotes BEAUTIFUL style and a fantastic talent for comparative figures of speech. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. The topic really draws one in..."
Posted by Unknown on "Sex Tides and Cosmic Dust " by Rebel tiGer King
- ""It'll be different tomorrow,
Maybe." - probably not, but you captured this state well. I love the imagery of walking past each other like glaciers...glaciers on fire. Painfully slow, but destined to melt. : ) Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Sex Tides and Cosmic Dust " by Rebel tiGer King
- "Great to see a new piece from you! The lines "Things can get ordinary
Things can become stale and die, but freedom
Freedom of the soul is accepting the fact
That sometimes things can get boring" hold a tremendous amount of truth... You often hear someone going on about how boring their relationship has gotten, or how "stale" and "smothered" they are feeling...which is a focus on an external factor. Sometimes it IS an external factor that is making someone unhappy...but often, it is something they actually have control over in terms of attitude and initiative. I am reminded of a quote by Hemingway, "You can’t get away from yourself by moving from one place to another," which could be altered to "from one relationship to another". Excellent piece, glad to see you posting again! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "He meets her, She meets everyman" by Rebel tiGer King
- "I think there's a whole lot of sad truth in this. Kind of like a confession for anyone who chooses to "give in to temptation" - for lack of a better phrase. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing it."
Posted by Unknown on "He meets her, She meets everyman" by Rebel tiGer King
- "I have really missed reading your writing. So I am glad I am back so I can learn from your amazing skills.
This is beyond wonderful. Absolutely perfect. You write with intention, clarity, and perfect rhythm.
Great job. XD"
Posted by Unknown on "- C'est la vie (Live and let die) -" by Rebel tiGer King
- "irreverent and divine... i didn't expect this dance...some of the most breathtaking visuals i've paid witness in poetry... glorious piece... you've blended into the most beautiful song and color of all. i feel as though i should have paid for entry... but then perhaps i did with the movement of my heart and the dance of sighs escaping my throat as bells weeping.. masterful, you two."
Posted by Unknown on "- this weather torn election poster - w/ Dancing_Monkey" by Rebel tiGer King
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