Comments by All Members
- "i hate love right now :( but this is still very good, I'd very much like to hear it if it were performed..."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Call Me Angel" by Rhys Ki
- "I loved the chorus and the subject is something I can relate to. The third stanza didn't seem to fit/rhyme... Maybe its not noticeable with music? Anyway... Good one :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Call Me Angel" by Rhys Ki
- "Wow... am sitting here, 'sleepless', so the title caught me. I read this several times over, and each time, something else jumped out to slap me in the face. I, too, hear the rattle of dry bones in my closet..."
Posted by Sketso on "When You Can't Sleep" by Rhys Ki
- "Whats gettin you down hon? I've been feelin this way a little myself lately :\ and I know the feeling of no comments too :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Security and Solitude" by Rhys Ki
- "So very-very true. I love how it shows the invincible feeling that youth have, along with indifference. It may be short but it's very excellent none the less..."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Security and Solitude" by Rhys Ki
- "If all seventeen year olds were as articulate as you, the world would be a much better place. (Plus, the poem kinda looks like the Liberty Bell...heh..just kidding)"
Posted by Unknown on "Me and My Lover" by Rhys Ki
- "I love the image this work portrays... also, impressive in the fact that the subject matter is so easy to relate too. Who hasn't at one point pondered loves manifestation and when they too would feel its grasp. keep writing ."
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Amongst the Flowers" by Rhys Ki
- "This is fantastic. I too would like to hear it set to music and i have some fo the ability to do that. If you wanna collaborate hit my DPMail. I'd love to work with you."
Posted by Preacher X on "If He Had Never Fallen" by Rhys Ki
- "my goodness...I love this. I'd DIE to hear it played and sung...Excellent regardless, though. Love love love it. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "If He Had Never Fallen" by Rhys Ki
- "this great i knowsome of your feelings in this one.. like a ghost is in your house.. you can hear them walking one sec and there gone the next.. great job and Welcome to DP"
Posted by Unknown on "When You Can't Sleep" by Rhys Ki
- "I'm glad you like it, guys. I wish that I hadn't merely fabricated the feelings shown here. They are only of my imaginings, for I have not yet the one I truly love. Thank you, though."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "Me and My Lover" by Rhys Ki
- "this is what my heart feels but could not let out as beautifully as you did. every word, every line equalled to every beat of my heart. longing for the love you already have. blissfull."
Posted by Unknown on "Me and My Lover" by Rhys Ki
- "*sigh of delight* i really like this poem a lot. It puts me in a wicked nice place with the love i have in my life. What a beautifully articulated ode to sharing absolute passionate bliss with the one you love.
hehe."
Posted by Unknown on "Me and My Lover" by Rhys Ki
- "it seems that he creates havoc so that he can save the damsel in distress... interesting and refreshing write"
Posted by Unknown on "Cancel Bay" by Rhys Ki
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