Comments by All Members
- "I used to be just like you, your write describes my past self. A lot of emotion is shown here. Keep up the good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "very emotional piece, with a hint of truth lying within the in-between lines.
well penned. may the child rest peacefully.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on ""Only a Dream"" by Trigger
- "lol...I did a haiku a while ago using a train concept with the exact same last line...I guess great minds think alike :P"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled Haiku." by Trigger
- "you never forget the last place time held relevance and matter was certain. nicely done"
Posted by elisa on "Untitled Haiku." by Trigger
- "this really hit me.
i try to keep a positive outlook on things and i try to help people.
but im guilty of not smiling. of not reaching out to a stranger, who may or may not need it.
i TRULY like your work. it shows a personal side. its obvious that its REAL emotions. i hope to see new works. i would love to read them."
Posted by Unknown on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "There were so many moments here that felt like someone was kicking me in the chest, they had such an impact. I loved how it changed rhythms around constantly, had an imperfect, assymetrical feel to it. The very structure reflected the message of the person too tired of trying to be perfect to want to bother any more. Just raw, powerful message, uncut and potent.
Definitely favoriting this one.
(Little tiny thing though, I had an impulse to skip over this one when I saw the first word in the second line was misspelled, I'm glad I decided to dismiss it as a typo [as it was] and continue reading, cause it turned out to be the only mistake. You're obviously a brilliant writer. You might want to fix that "achieve" so other people don't pass over this gem.)"
Posted by Unknown on "Love, by the way" by Trigger
- "*perks* wow, thanks. Never thought I'd say that in a comment on another person's poem, haha. and Trigger, you know how I feel on this one, still the same. I've read it my fair share of times :)"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "this is why. i was looking over some of the favorites of Echoes (who is incredibley intelligent in choosing amazing work that i always enjoy reading,) when i saw this. as soon as i started reading it was impossible to stop. i wish i could have read this earlier, it's truely inspiring."
Posted by thelostmessenger on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "If these are your normal thoughts as you finished stating, I give up my slogan of having a labyrinth for a mind. I give it to you :P Well written"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Love, by the way" by Trigger
- "This is hard to read a lot of your writes in one sitting, I'm still dwelling on thoughts from the last ones. You have a talent for making the reader think. The repetition in this piece added a nice effect when I read it, well done"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Depth Perception" by Trigger
- "I love the way you talk as though a philosopher having a debate within himself, asking questions and drawing connections for us to answer for ourselves. Well written *salutes*"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Polar" by Trigger
- "So very glad you recommended I read this. How I do love poetry that makes me think. And at the same time the mention of emotion and the foundations of what poetry is. This is a masterpiece of thoughts that I commend you on and which I will add to my list of favorite works *salutes*
"What is a poem, but a twisted paradime wrapped in the clutches of an obstenate thought, solitary in it's stance,"
Beautiful wording by the way :)"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "P.O.E.M." by Trigger
- "yin and yang. nice concept. very true, how could there be hate if there is no love etc... very nice write. i agree with the series idea, i'd love to hear more."
Posted by denver nitze on "Polar" by Trigger
- "Makes alot of sence...nice write..I think this could turn into a series if you have mor philosophies to put out there"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "Polar" by Trigger
- "i agree with this... like the phrase. "you don't know peace til you've had suffering..." also, in a world where there were never any conflicts...we would just totally freak out...and then have to create our own...otherwise what is our purpose...some might feel. to right the wrong and such. i enjoyed this...:)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Polar" by Trigger
- "So very true mate, take the good with the bad, or something like that huh?"
Posted by Phoenix on "Polar" by Trigger
- "supposedly... if there were no negs there'd be no pos... maybe... I wonder about that. I mean, why not... is everything either a neg or a pos... what about the blah? Either way, I like writes that question the meaning of words, of the way we use them, of the investment we give them... and this does that. what if there really are no negs and no pos and everything is blah... then isnt everything okay, kinda like not good, not bad, just okay... just blah... then maybe our quaint lil saying loses the whole hopeful encouragement aspect... and, eventually, isnt everything going to be just that, just blah... (a little burst of nihilism for ya) anyway, thought provoking... questioning, seeking... and I think, culturally and humanly revealing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Polar" by Trigger
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