Untitled Haiku.

Life is a train ride
Deep tunnels, wonderful views
I'm tied to the tracks

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Published on Monday, July 20, 2009. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Untitled Haiku."

On Monday, October 17, 2022, carlosjackal (3016) wrote:

Perfect haiku.
On Wednesday, December 27, 2017, Cassette (1144) wrote:

I've spent my life living next to train tracks so this resonated with me.
A former member wrote: Nice! Its rare to find a good and meaningful haiko this side of Boshu. And its funny too!
A former member wrote: lol...I did a haiku a while ago using a train concept with the exact same last line...I guess great minds think alike :P
On Monday, July 20, 2009, elisa (1616) wrote:

you never forget the last place time held relevance and matter was certain. nicely done
A former member wrote: *cuts you loose and hands over a lolly* silly person
On Monday, July 20, 2009, Sketso (435) wrote:

I love haiku and the punch they deliver. Quick and potent.