Comments by All Members
- "i can relate to this at the minute, finding someone, something, 'you are the air, whos fingers caress my face..' sigh.. i felt this. beautifully done cutieful :)"
Posted by Tania on "You." by asphyxia
- "This rings with that feeling of hopelessness, nothing inspires, nothing excites. Knowledge weighs you down instead of feeding creativity and free-thought. Very good write. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "(good job, hey, thanks)" by asphyxia
- "i like this...to me it seems like you've gone blind some how, metaphorically or literally at the end. a good brain tease, this one. "
Posted by sIo on "(good job, hey, thanks)" by asphyxia
- "ditto all the comments below ;)....I love this feeling that you have shared.These are the moments that birth life's meaning"
Posted by Unknown on "You." by asphyxia
- "Thank you jolene you are well worthy of a fave I always enjoy all you write =)"
Posted by Tania on "You." by asphyxia
- "Wow..there should be more comments on this! Have to agree with Markus, really like the build up to the hot, animalistic climax. And the sex/sexuality as art/artistry ending was a real clincher =) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Canvassing Intimacies" by asphyxia
- "I meant to comment on this much much earlier when you first posted it but I got so lost in it I kept forgetting! Anyway, this moved me. Really. Paradise. Home. This moved me."
Posted by nur hidayah on "You." by asphyxia
- "Jolene, this was wickedly brilliant. Loved the sentiment, warmed my heart so it did =) Excellent stuff, lady! -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "You." by asphyxia
- "Yeah! I agree! It just gets annoying sometimes. :) thank you, though, for reminding me of that!"
Posted by asphyxia on "journal.entry" by asphyxia
- "Who isn't, elisa? People can be idiotic conformists. The sad thing is, they succeed in bringing people down with them. Jo, it's great you don't let them do that to you. Don't feel too bad about it. They're not even worth it. =)"
Posted by nur hidayah on "journal.entry" by asphyxia
- "(no you didnt come over all 'getting' dont worry about it) well this is my favourite write from you.. seriously. i might have even faved this IF i had the available bookmarks... so again.. welcome jolene :) "
Posted by Tania on "[i see the lies but still trip over them]" by asphyxia
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