Comments by All Members
- "This is spectacular, darling. Powerful and insanely wistful at the same time. Reminds me of how I blow a kiss every night in the direction of Home, hoping someone grabs them up and holds them tight, remembering me and missing me. "
Posted by Lux on "A Simple Hello" by unspeakable truth
- "being present in the moment is the message I got from this...wasting the time that's in front of us ,yearning for some unattainable dream...or perhaps the key is to pay more attention to your dreams and not give up hope...there's always a new dawn..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Inattentiveness" by unspeakable truth
- "what is truth? i don't think there is an answer to this question. it'll drive you insane trying to get it. and words.. sometimes they don't mean anything do they? sometimes they're just noises. but this.. your words are brilliant. you've really captured the emotion and built a masterpiece out of it. thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Words ... warped meanings under superficial starlight ..." by unspeakable truth
- "Those places we stay never last when all we do is look for rest. I suppose it works this way for a reason, you could speculate so much but, even though it hurt's for a time, there are lapses where the pain shrinks to a hum and we remember ourselves and what we are meant to do. stay strong and thank you for these beautiful renderings."
Posted by Phalanx on "Sick Place Inbetween" by unspeakable truth
- "You're an excellent natural poet. The words and phrases flow from one part of an idea to the next until the whole is revealed. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Inciting Silence" by unspeakable truth
- "well writtenly said.. .. i am finding the vortextual wind in my head to be something of a muse, except that lately it says things i cannot pen.. .. .youve conjured a imagetic piece full of contrast and allusion. .. to have these things that wont come out.....that Do come out despite our best efforts to keep them tucked away and to even decipher.....great stuff."
Posted by Unknown on "the depravity, in a deplorable state of mind" by unspeakable truth
- "This is one of those horror movies that generates suspense...delivering only one body to the count.Beautifully rendered."
Posted by Honey on "Blurred Lines" by unspeakable truth
- "interesting... there's so much to digest, to digress, to invest..... the thoughts of reaching out into what or who once was... sounds of a voice barely remembered... the passage of time... and what has it taken, what has it left... and we all search to find peace ..... in the rabbit hole.... or above...... clean or not. and what can one do but wish for the best and send words.... thoughts..... a few passing thoughts about what was, what may be, and what still is not."
Posted by Unknown on "It always feels a bit like being taken hostage" by unspeakable truth
- "apaga la luce! Hit the lights! I really liked the interrogation room image developed here... the feel of being under the lights... of being exposed by them.... of wondering what it is that the light can reveal, what forgotten shame and guilt can bubble to the surface... wonderful write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dim the Lights" by unspeakable truth
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