Comments by All Members
- "YES YES YES! Finely a poet who exposes the rats for who they really are! Great job"
Posted by Unknown on "chintzy" by zanewill
- "the paradox of being with... ? "doomed within the hearts of the familiar"... seeking out others for selfish reasons? interesting underpinnings of love and self here. uniquely expressed!"
Posted by Unknown on "Solidarity Stands Alone" by zanewill
- "scars are the maps of what made us who we are. we all have them and most hide them. very nice. ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "facewrek" by zanewill
- "I saw a program talking about pearl harbor being the exact same as the twin towers. Yhe USA knowing it would happen, and counting the losses less then the gain. Good write. Nice to see something once ina while, comprehendable"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "world war one" by zanewill
- "While I don't agree with you on the subject of pearl harbor, the rest of this was a wonderful sentiment. Even if only a dream of a perfect world. Right on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "world war one" by zanewill
- "nice. that was great. kinda simple...but with an awesome flow to it that was totally wicked. i could picture being on it while thinking this...but maybe not. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Opium Dreams?" by zanewill
- "well wrapped, sinuous design....it freefalls effectively without crashing into flowery manic over-the-top-ness....and I feared the worst with the initial 'rhyming segment', but you just about harmonized the balance I reckon....nice one, good effort"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Opium Dreams?" by zanewill
- "this is awesome. my only complaint is that the title does it no justice. too bland for such a beautifully woven piece. yet another insanely great piece. *double fisted cheers*"
Posted by denver nitze on "whispers of a dying rose" by zanewill
- "this struck me as a very maze-like web of imagery that seeks to disrupt standard syntax, perhaps seeking to move beyond the logic of language to discover a communication of pure pictorial means. Perhaps this may be a way of understanding that resists typical modes of expression; perhaps it is more primordial than language... I didn't recognize "hemetic" I know of a "hemic" which comes from the GK for blood. I get a sense of Armageddon or apocalypse or revelations or some other world threatening crisis, biblical I think... this made me think, fondly, of Spill the Blood by Slayer, thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "Hemetic Ode" by zanewill
- "Sometimes, mostly when I haven't slept well, I get this nagging feeling like the house is going to explode from some imagined gas leak, so much that I almost expect it to happen. That's what this reminds me of. what a way to string together, words. Write on. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "Hemetic Ode" by zanewill
- "I always love reading your work and this is no exception. Pleasingly perfect."
Posted by Mylissa on "Remains" by zanewill
- "brilliant, simply fucking brilliant, agree with sinisterbaptizm, epic. "
Posted by Unknown on "Brutal" by zanewill
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