Comments by All Members
- "dreary day...again I have a Poe esque vision...hands up who hasn't been inspired by Poe, wow!! Your works dispell an irruption of quiet screams in the intellectual recess of your dark shadows....awaiting the 'coming storm', each stanza built with intrisic"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Scattering(s)" by jack paper
- "Uggh, this was outstanding. I read it twice. It grabbed me in the beginning and left me in awe at the end. you are amazing."
Posted by Mylissa on "Scattering(s)" by jack paper
- ""Into the placid center of my soul You displace and impart An equal amount of grace" i like you more and more with each poem i read. this was excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Circles" by jack paper
- "I no overlookie... you thrill me when you write. you are amazing. more, more, and more. this is outstanding."
Posted by Mylissa on "Dark Encounter" by jack paper
- "I'm going to try and help you out here, this deserves a lot more attention to it, what a stormbound brilliant aliterative attentative poem....I can't believe how overlooked it's been"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Dark Encounter" by jack paper
- "I could just really feel the tension dripping off of every word,good job...
***Ashley"
Posted by Unknown on "Breathe" by jack paper
- "I am usually the one running from feelings everything thinks that is strong, it is because I am too weak to feel. wonderful write. "
Posted by Mylissa on "connection" by jack paper
- "So beautifully written, yet utterly crushing. I absolutely love this. And it seemed to go perfectly with the song I'm currently listening to (Everything - Lifehouse)..."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Etched (when you left)" by jack paper
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