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"this has a luscious taste to it, a sensual creation, creatively crafted...vividly drawing from a common feeling;i think, but taking that feeling to such a level that it shines originally. well spoken piece."
Posted by AniDayz on "The Night The Moon Shattered" by kiss of the dark

"A cradle for the night..."
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"I realize the true beauty of darkness itself now. I never imagine such perfection could be achieved. You have my respect and my tortured dreams..."
Posted by Unknown on "The Night The Moon Shattered" by kiss of the dark

"Bravo. *poetic finger snaps here*"
Posted by Bluegirl on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"awesome"
Posted by Jaded Ireland on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"yes fairytale esque and captivating enriching...nice work, well spaced and presented and gripping."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

""she fell so far deep into the thick lustful gravity of her sleep her dreams and her wishes became her demise." very beautiful poetry..soft yet powerfully outstanding. marvelous write."
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"Tremendous, unwavering romanticism lies beneath the woe and tragedy. .."if only she had known that in dreamland, sand was endless but life was just a myth." Poetry incarnate."
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"The core of this work is amazing. Very well crafted, and quite a sad/entangling tale. +FtF+"
Posted by Unknown on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"Omg jaw dropping to say the least hun! This blew me outta that ocean water, and gave me such a feeling of remorse, yet also of relief. Wow, this was pure brilliance. *Kudos* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)" by kiss of the dark

"Haunting and rhythmically paced. The most poignant of tragedies are often..the most beautiful. There is mourning."
Posted by Unknown on "there she stood....[my sleeping beauty]" by kiss of the dark

""she was slow dancing underneath artificial snowflakes" very heartbreaking descriptions. and that ending...well that made me want to cry."
Posted by dying angel on "there she stood....[my sleeping beauty]" by kiss of the dark

"absolutely fantastic."
Posted by Unknown on "Sleeping hearts. [butterfly in a blender]" by kiss of the dark

"Splendid. The feelings, that you bring through. I'm having a wonderful time reading your works. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Sleeping hearts. [butterfly in a blender]" by kiss of the dark

""Inside the box [a bloodstained box] our hearts sleep and forget to beat".. Ah, mercy me! Fervent and alive in the most devasting of ways, I could taste butterfly veins twitching. You always write with such a admirable passion.. exquisite!"
Posted by Unknown on "Sleeping hearts. [butterfly in a blender]" by kiss of the dark

"a strange piece with an unusual slant on the butterflies. I wonder what butterfly juice tastes like?"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Sleeping hearts. [butterfly in a blender]" by kiss of the dark

"I wish my thoughts always came to me in poetry form. Half the time my poetry doesn't even come in thought form. What? Me either. Great write."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"Amen! I could'nt agree more. Great write!"
Posted by Eric on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"all I can say is keep writing:) "
Posted by Unknown on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"wow this is so true. very well done. it's better to die doing something you love. "
Posted by dying angel on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"Let me guess, these are all poets that have died, right? Nice encouragement. lol!"
Posted by Unknown on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"Damn, nicely done! Succombing to what it is you are yet with a sense of conviction. How ironic. What a well worded kung fu kick to the dome. Yous is alright!"
Posted by Unknown on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"I agree with Cor, those last two lines, incredible! Wow... I think a lot of poets will relate to this. Bravo hun, well done! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"Those last two lines are the killer. Beautifully written! -Cor"
Posted by PaperPromises on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"Here, here. Wonderful. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"I think I might die because of this too, I feel so empty and the poetry becomes a labour, it couldn't save talented Yoshi Ooshi; Sylvia Plath; Hart Crane...can it save anyone? I will try to let it, very interesting post, good too."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"This is an excellant poem. I love the ending of it. Such words speak truth and earn a thumbs up from me."
Posted by The Shattered Heart on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

""I would rather die with pen in hand, my tragedy in script, than to die with my secret rotting on my tongue." I agree 100%...bravo bravo! "
Posted by Soulfire on "Being a poet will kill you." by kiss of the dark

"This hits home, and it is tragically beautiful. Heart hitting, soul thump for sure. Outstanding. Silver is my fave, great title! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "You Painted Me Silver..." by kiss of the dark

"The visions are lik a stained glass whirlwind. Vivid spinning emotions. Wow. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Beautiful Casualties and Angelic Pesticides" by kiss of the dark

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