Ocean Blossoms (she died in her sleep last night)

By kiss of the dark

She died in her sleep last night,

Because of her extreme thought

that birthed from blossoming

ocean flowers

*

They lushly sway

in the endless seas

of "what if's" and the

creation of wonder...

*

She drowned in the waters

waiting for the waves to

take her away from the

deranged shore of her reality.

*

A mermaid she was not

*

A soft sea creature she never was

*

But a lover, oh a lover...indeed she was born.

*

After years and years

of vividly painted dreams

of Eden's rivers and the

Mercurial waters of no-man's land,

she fell so far deep into

the thick lustful gravity of her sleep

her dreams and her wishes

became her demise.

*

[She died in her sleep last night,

Because of her extreme thought

that birthed from blossoming

ocean flowers,

The thought that her dreams could

take her away from her life,

just for an hourglass's worth of

sweet precious time,

if only she had known that

in dreamland,

sand was endless but life

was just a myth.]

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© 2006 kiss of the dark
Published on Thursday, August 10, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Powerful imagery and expression of the despair caused by a reality that we can't accept.. Congratulations! Poem of the day indeed :)

  • blue angel On Sunday, August 24, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    hauntingly powerful, and sorrowfully enchanting!, congratulations! :)

  • A former member wrote: A cradle for the night...

  • Jaded Ireland On Friday, August 11, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26)By person wrote:

    awesome

  • A former member wrote: "she fell so far deep into the thick lustful gravity of her sleep her dreams and her wishes became her demise." very beautiful poetry..soft yet powerfully outstanding. marvelous write.

  • A former member wrote: Tremendous, unwavering romanticism lies beneath the woe and tragedy. .."if only she had known that in dreamland, sand was endless but life was just a myth." Poetry incarnate.

  • A former member wrote: The core of this work is amazing. Very well crafted, and quite a sad/entangling tale. +FtF+

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, August 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Omg jaw dropping to say the least hun! This blew me outta that ocean water, and gave me such a feeling of remorse, yet also of relief. Wow, this was pure brilliance. *Kudos* Julia~

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