Comments by All Members
- "beautifully done...such timeless amorous expression. the pleading repetition was wonderfully effective. lovely work. ~b"
Posted by blake on "Dove Psalm" by kiss of the dark
- "I must say.. I'm in tears. This is absolutely wrenching as it gorgeous. One of the mose genuine, heartfelt pieces I have ever had the pleasure of reading... Divine write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dove Psalm" by kiss of the dark
- "I agree with sunflower girl. Those lines were eloquent. I imagined a balerina, full of grace with her hair down (help me out on this one plz what are sepia locks, are they a hairstyle)none the less the grace and beauty speak out from these lines."
Posted by Unknown on "In Love With A Poet" by kiss of the dark
- "If I think too much about the title I just get this great sense of the impending 'next' that cannot help but lay just beyond the next words... nice"
Posted by Unknown on "Interlude" by kiss of the dark
- "this is beautiful. it isn't often that you see a peice like this on DP. i'm glad i stumbled across it. It has brought a smile to my face, and taken me back to somewhere in my past. Thank You. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "Interlude" by kiss of the dark
- "This is a wonderful discription, of a perfect moment. "beauty in it's original state" I loved that line. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Interlude" by kiss of the dark
- ""In my dreams, I put the black and ivory keys In my hair. And watched your fingers dance Within my sepia locks. " this was simply astounding. great write, and welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "In Love With A Poet" by kiss of the dark
- "oops i pressed send by accident. i really like your style a lot. and the ending "Involuntary suicide."...hit me because we really do kill a part of our selves to love another. you've captured the reality of falling."
Posted by dying angel on "In Love With A Poet" by kiss of the dark
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