Interlude
By kiss of the dark
Morning casts its soft glow
On my lavender sheets
Creating ripples made of
The sun's tongue
Your long arms
Preciously cradle me
Underneath the comforter
And in this moment
I realize that
My pain is gone
Turning over to see your
Dark cherub face
Your breath lightly lands
On my cheeks
And I feel your warmth
Dove-like grace
Encumbers you
And me
As this morning unfolds
Into a romantic interlude
Whispers released
I serenade you during
Your sweet slumber
Your eyes part
Like the red sea
And I see your magnificent
Jade majesty
Glowing almost
Sparkling with awe
Your eyes withold my breath
And I see for the first time
Beauty
In its original state
Cathartic warmness
Hindering a secret
Within your
Closed perfect mouth
Begging for your
Voice to release
A timely
Yet frightening stanza
That reveals to me the truth...
"I love you..."
Light words
Caress my face
And seep into my lungs
Capturing my heart
Causing it to swell
Comments on "Interlude"
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A former member wrote:
This is a delight to read. Sweet and sentimental.
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A former member wrote:
If I think too much about the title I just get this great sense of the impending 'next' that cannot help but lay just beyond the next words... nice
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A former member wrote:
.. this creates a longing for that outta reach... very romantically moving indeed
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On Saturday, June 24, 2006, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
this is beautiful. it isn't often that you see a peice like this on DP. i'm glad i stumbled across it. It has brought a smile to my face, and taken me back to somewhere in my past. Thank You. ~gothic~
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On Saturday, June 24, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
This is a wonderful discription, of a perfect moment. "beauty in it's original state" I loved that line. ^V^