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My Final Goodbye
By kiss of the dark
My Final Goodbye
You never loved me
You faked the kisses
And pretended to care
You played me for a fool;
An inexperienced simpleton
You knew I would fall for
Your precious clouds and blood;
Making me believe that
They were gifts from your heart
You had me from the first time
You looked into my eyes
And stole my pain
It seemed so real!
You can't look me in the face anymore
I can't believe you gave up our Love as if
It were an apparition of dust
I really did love you...
...Did you love me?
And now that I've found nothing
At all to answer my question
I will leave you...
With a cautioned farewell
And give you back what
I loved most about you...
Your song.
This is my final goodbye...
Yes my Dear,
All is lost.
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© 2006 kiss of the dark
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On Saturday, December 21, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82)
wrote:
A very well written piece you have here outstanding job l can really relate.
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A former member wrote:
Good poem. It had a lot of heart and I can feel the hurt this person caused you.
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A former member wrote:
wow... i love it!!! i can relate to this and i have felt the emotions in this poem.
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On Wednesday, January 24, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Seems to eminate more of a sense of loss of faith, especially with the capitalization of key words... makes me wonder the background of the piece...if intentional.
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A former member wrote:
It reminded me of me. Fantabular!
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On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
beautifully written.. you simply told him/her that your heart was broken and that you were fooled once, but never again.. amazing what you can write
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On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, unknown_bitch_2003
(4) wrote:
I no what your going through. great write
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On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
very haunting. reminds me of somone i would like to forget. a lovely and deep write.
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On Monday, June 12, 2006, ZealousValadiction
(42) wrote:
The emotion in this Write is wierdly enough beautiful, saying good bye is hard but sometimes the best thing to do, Great write. I hope to see you around-Laurie
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