Comments by All Members
- "Intense, seriously...gave me goosebumps. I never want to read it again because it scares me. But you write well."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Time" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "I'm blown away... maybe cause that'S something I wanted to do on my own. Very touching piece of work!"
Posted by Any on "Watch" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "damn.. this is good... for that person to just see and you want them to know how badly you feel, and they just don't know.. and then to show them that it could be somebody elses life if they don't bother to look... this is amazing.. its definatly a fav."
Posted by mywristshurt on "I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "i agree with amanda (tornpaperdoll) you did a great job, i really like this, you have great potential, the only thing i dont like about this is the title, other than that great job ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Josh" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "very, very slowly. I can feel your pain, and knowing several people who have gone through this, I can sympathize even though everyones pain is different."
Posted by Guillotine on "Forget" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "This is horrible...why does it seem that victims of sexual abuse are targeted more than once throughout their lives...i cannot say i know but i do hope you can work through this.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Forget" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "ok, did you crawl inside my heart about a month and a half ago? i so feel this, more than i can possibly say."
Posted by Arianna on "I wish" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "I wrote this the same night i wrote the other one and it is about the same guy. I really apprecitate all the comments it makes me want to keep writing thanks a lot ;)"
Posted by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201 on "I wish" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "yeah, that's a lot better. i love your work use every bit of anger, frustration, and what-not that you have...it does your work good!"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "That look" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "AAhhh..this i love. very nice, i think we've all felt this way before esp. the part about "i wish i never fucked you." i've thought that a time or two. am i right?! lol. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "I wish" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "this seems to tie in with the other piece that follows on from it and the tragedy seems to echo all around your head with the malice of a cyclone.Intense and sorrowful."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I wish" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "WOW! VERY POWERFULL i like it though. some guys are pricks. guys are like roses but watch out for there thorns.:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Fuck you" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "kinda reminds me of 'this love' by pantera.. 'i'd kill my self for you, I'd kill you for myself' (I prefer the latter half of the chiasmus"
Posted by Unknown on "I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "hmmmmmm *ponders the reversal in perspective* well, I love the concept... but I would prefer (and this matters not, so please nevermind) you killing him and then him knowing how you feel ;)~ very enticing twist of pov"
Posted by Unknown on "I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "ouch.... way to let it all out. no wait, tell me what you really think ;) I like the line where you slit his wrists most, Don'cha hate it when some one goes psycho flip flop unstable on ya... this is one hell of a fuckin rant!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fuck you" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "sorry..i've commented on every poem of yours, but this one i love the most...ima keep my eye on you...you've gotta lotta potential.the whole thing's perfect from title to last line. i look forward to what's to come. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Josh" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
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