Comments by All Members
- "The heart. Wouldn't be nice to rip that sucker out and put it on the shelf for a while? Great poem. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Broken Toy" by darkversion
- "Simplicity brings out the truth, and I've definitely felt these things before. Very nice."
Posted by MESUN on "Visions" by darkversion
- "like a Steiff bear having its stuffed heart ripped out. Excelent toy allusion gives it a child like fascination of new morbidity.and if i knew what that meant I might have said it better."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Broken Toy" by darkversion
- "Monsters in the cage - reminds me of those toys what were they called boggles or something you got use them like puppets and they were slimy and such...antways..nice try; a monsters ball."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Monsters Cage" by darkversion
- "a rythmic pounding on tortured drums of rage, screaming quietly as demons in our minds. great write *winks*"
Posted by Muse on "Red Ink" by darkversion
- "is the poem supposed to look like one of those atom bomb clouds? if so, it adds to the effect, a subtle and nicely played emphasizer"
Posted by Muse on "Self-Elimination" by darkversion
- "hahaha lol. i love how guys obsess over their cars, hats, musical instruments. i think its the cutest thing in the world"
Posted by dying angel on "Me & You*" by darkversion
