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  • "I have been posting since i was 13..... and im 25 now.... been years tho.... years... but i just paid for a year, so i might as well start again..."
    Posted by slow.burn.star on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
  • "Such sadness...longing.This dug its nails into my shoulder blades and held me in embrace like grim death.I found myself holding my breath throughout....unable to exhale until the finish...and then...air,dizzying air.Just...incredible,as always."
    Posted by Honey on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
  • ""even without wings, i'll fly away. even without wings, i'll find you someday" That's an amazing line, this whole piece left my head swimming with images... amazing!"
    Posted by FallenSky on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
  • "this tropicalsnowstorm guy tends to show up right before me and say what i intended to say thus forcing me to attempt to be creative in order not to appear mundane. fuck that: "& you just sleep" perfect final line to an introspective narrative that is challenging but enriching to identify with."
    Posted by Jonas on "Hieroglyphics in the east gateway: sleep" by slow.burn.star
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