Comments by All Members
- "i loved a girl, polly, polly ethlene, she was everything to me and everything all at once, until her plastic pieces broke. love the love/plastic play. forlorn poetry, the perfect 4am find."
Posted by Jonas on "- Plastic Injection Molded -" by slow.burn.star
- "this format was different...it jumbled all these different lines and meanings into my head all at once in a sense. had to read it a few time to let the words chime thoroughly to my brain. thank you for your time:)"
Posted by Twilight on "UndeRsight_____" by slow.burn.star
- "your words always are passionate yet they seem dooming at the same time. which creates a beauty beyond bliss. candy to my eyes and mind."
Posted by Twilight on ".fogged.up.eyes." by slow.burn.star
- "I really like the storyboard-type format... such vivid images. The opening stanza had my mind running free and feeling wonderful, and you so effectively changed this around as I continued to read. Amazing work. Fox"
Posted by flying_fox on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "kisses and murder... i think you are really talented, and you inspire me everytime i read your work to cut deep with my words... i love you <3"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "'love the filmic qualities woven throughout; the visuals rendered so visual.' my. how you make readiNg comments like film paintings & poetry... you iNspire me. drowned."
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "FLASH TO: 'burning like _the sky.
clouds fluxing.
dangerous girl.' hummms... beautiful. wet glitter. like television w/ soul. '& little flecks of blood.'
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Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "'the darkened streets.
scattered puddles glowing silver, then black under my feet.
the hum of the world. numb hands.' FLASH TO: 'no more stars in your stare.' cinematic. divine chop cut film-edit feel. flow. perfect juxtoposed rhythm. in numb winds."
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "The images I get from reading this are stunning. "your dreams- are dripping. all over the floor." All your works make for amazing reading. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "beautiful; as Twilight said, passionate...intensely so... I love the filmic qualities woven throughout; the visuals rendered so vivid. fabulous work. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "wow this leaves me speechless. truly passionate and interesting at the same time. very well done."
Posted by Twilight on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
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