Comments by All Members
- "you know its hot and I love it =)
So much more to say about it, but I will leave it with: I especially like the sweet part at the end... "
Posted by BrokenButterflyWings on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "So moving. So amazing. The imagery is incredible, I find the way that you view the world fascinating… but, I need to go hug you now …"
Posted by BrokenButterflyWings on "3am" by edenscancer
- "...it's not about me, or you
it's about creating one
from destroying two...
violent, passionate,raw...this makes me want to stop breathing
"
Posted by Vicious Pixie on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "it was like...being bitten, hard, while making love...pain, but so sweet, so captivating...makes you want to come back for more"
Posted by Vicious Pixie on "3am" by edenscancer
- "wow..this was indeed rather haunting. and those last two lines were just amazing. summed it up perfectly, great write."
Posted by Unknown on "phantom" by edenscancer
- "this is just amazing..it flowed so perfectly. "sick sad sonic sleep seeps into me but I cannot sleep what do I have left to dream I lay in bed and pull close the sheets as the music sings" bloody hell. this is just amazing. welcome to dp, please stay."
Posted by Unknown on "3am" by edenscancer
- "haunt of a write. "we're all just the ghosts we want to be".. killer line, truly."
Posted by Unknown on "phantom" by edenscancer
- "..read as if collapsing mind-stems to mouth, a deafening crash.. bit my tongue and held it as a whispered retort to screams in my head. fiercely penned."
Posted by Unknown on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "razor-glare glance into your psyche.. black shine almost hurts my ears.."the skin becomes a noose so tight, you just want to itch it from your bones".. that line inspired me."
Posted by Unknown on "1 a.m" by edenscancer
- "mind-binding. tightly-wrought and unforgiving...well executed, most definitely."
Posted by Unknown on "refract" by edenscancer
- "I was eager to read you since I voted you in.. you've a firm grip of words and a reverberating spine rattle that licks my lips and steals my breath.. I find it ironic that these words, in particular, have awakened such life within me.."
Posted by Unknown on "dearly departed" by edenscancer
- ".."my blanket was japanese and had no pain and didn't die/my blanket was strong and vibrant and selfless and still alive/god laughs at 3am".. I hold those lines close for different reasons.. awe-mazing write."
Posted by Unknown on "3am" by edenscancer
- "Fucking hell.. this is a whispered consistent/insistent knock on the door of my mind, tastes of nerve-shocking aftermath..wow. words that echo in my mind and soul.. I have to fav. this.."
Posted by Unknown on "3am" by edenscancer
- "WOW! i think this my first read of you, I jsst gotta say 'eating just belays the sex we suck to feed our hearts' - holy hell, suck me through a drain pipe backwrds, wicked imagination! Phantom...planet. Yeeesss. Bring it on!"
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "phantom" by edenscancer
- "speechless *again* .. I kinda got wrapped up in the emotion of this piece (no pun intended) .. it shows the anguish and is really quite fucking heart-breaking .. and soul destroying .. 'he laughs at me for he has the blanket i was sleeping in' .. "
Posted by mozarts cat on "3am" by edenscancer
- "Simply beautiful! A insane masterpiece...I think we shall call it beautifully insane..."
Posted by Mylissa on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "i liked this... it was quiet and had a really slow pace for me, like it was being whispered in echoes, or ripples in time. -end"
Posted by Possesion on "phantom" by edenscancer
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