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phantom
By edenscancer
sentient light blue eyes and rain is pouring to my heart like dripping
demorol
nothings new except the new and old alike its like some kind of trip a
drip
And I don't know just where I am
your arms wrap around me like a snake is eating at its prey
and all the eating just belays the sex we suck to feed our heads
and the old once told me it's the only thing that stops the dead
And I don't know just where I am
phantom... planet...
we're all just whispers of the ghosts we were
we're all just the ghosts we want to be
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© 2006 edenscancer
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(62)
wrote:
"..and rain is pouring to my heart like dripping demarol..." beautiful. this made me think of that restlessness that occurs between people when the end of a relationship is near, but no one wants to talk about it
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A former member wrote:
wow..this was indeed rather haunting. and those last two lines were just amazing. summed it up perfectly, great write.
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A former member wrote:
haunt of a write. "we're all just the ghosts we want to be".. killer line, truly.
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On Monday, April 10, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
have to agree with Possession on this one .. it whispers .. another awesome write =)
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On Sunday, April 9, 2006, Possesion
(137) wrote:
i liked this... it was quiet and had a really slow pace for me, like it was being whispered in echoes, or ripples in time. -end
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