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- "This is very beautiful and very well done. It truly hit home for me and it felt like it could have been torn from the pages of my life... I like this very much, keep up the fantastic work."
Posted by Unknown on "Tormented Fall" by PaperPromises
- "I have felt myself trapped in this cycle on more than one occasion. It is difficult to dig through the plasticity to get to the real and frustrating when your heart and mind cannot find what it craves. Interesting read hope you find what you are seeking."
Posted by Dilated View on "Grains of Sand" by PaperPromises
- "mmmmm darkened skies... a storm within... desolate and yet overwhelming the horizon with an absence that dwells throughout... discoloring the world and inviting no one, no one at all. Very well composed, the narrative within verse is well developed and th"
Posted by Unknown on "And the [Forecast] Today Is.." by PaperPromises
- ""He's never coming back." God, how those four words hit home like darts to the heart...I swear...that last line showed me every truth I've been denying. Gorgeously done...~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "And the [Forecast] Today Is.." by PaperPromises
- "This gave me shivers when I read it I got crazy images that wounded my mind, it was just beautifully choative, and I loved every word it just had a tang to it that slapped me around. Good work ~nightly"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Life of the Dead" by PaperPromises
- "Woo. I knew a girl back in the day. I couldnet stand it! Whenever we would chat, all I could do was be sympathetic, nonstop. No fun. She should have abused herself with food! Id take a morbidly obese girl with issues over a thin girl with fresh scars all "
Posted by AbjectColloquialist on "[Selfish] Acts of [Self] Mutilation" by PaperPromises
- "This...was simply beautiful. I can't believe how you can put so much of what we are thinking into the simplest form of words. This poem spoke to me. I am really glad you wrote it. I am not trying to show off, but I posted this on my wall right next to my "
Posted by Loketha Angel on "[Selfish] Acts of [Self] Mutilation" by PaperPromises
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