Comments by All Members
- "There is no use to 'wonder' what things might have been but I have no room to talk since my life is a poem of what ifs... I Loved this it screams my name and the road ahead of me but what if...see I told you ...really this tugged at every emotion I have. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Feeling Sorry For Myself" by johntaiyu
- "Lives are interconnected in a cosmic sort of comedy/tragedy...but never lose hope...yeah, we all feel so fucked up at times, but when we are at the bottom of the deepest well...all we can see is the light above...a courageous post, all respects for you man...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Feeling Sorry For Myself" by johntaiyu
- "Wow this hit hard. As I read this i just wondered if this will be me. I feel like I've already done two cycles always me wanting someone to stay always me the reason its hard for them to return. Great write and a good lesson hidden here too"
Posted by Unknown on "Feeling Sorry For Myself" by johntaiyu
- "There was a branch of my lifeline there, when this poem would have been the theme. I'm glad that's over. "so it's no fucking wonder i'm alone again at 50, though this is the first time I've done it sober." Crushing."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Feeling Sorry For Myself" by johntaiyu
- "You both forget the making up, and you didn't even get the make up sex to boot? Man, that's a shit deal. Nice write man. Fear and loathing-ish."
Posted by Alanarchy on "How Much Drunk We’d Got" by johntaiyu
- "I've read alot of heartache today, and it brings back alot of unwanted memories. Still, this was very raw, and personal. Very REAL. True poetry. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "My Stupid Stupid Heart" by johntaiyu
- "like the crabby meets the earnest; an odd mirror moment; a reflection in the well. Hopefully the poem will age well...a good wistful tinged slant"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "All Good Stories" by johntaiyu
- "nothing is so elegant or haunting as the breaking/tearing down of walls; only the rarest and truest of people can do that to you. .."
Posted by Unknown on "All Good Stories" by johntaiyu
- "excellent...to rediscover a feeling, or a fleeting emotion, you long ago thought forgotten and worn-out by time, is a beautiful thing. I love the ending of this. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "All Good Stories" by johntaiyu
- "an ironic and unusual metaphorical comparison...his really does seem to showcase how the relationships are as fragile or risky as the deer's road-crossing...and the aftermath of things....reducing roadkill,etc....very hard-hitting"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Where the Weeds End" by johntaiyu
- "encapsulating write; the images make us near blind with anguish, as the deer. . .so succinct and sinewed clear. . .i should have read this with a whisper voice~
ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Where the Weeds End" by johntaiyu
- "It takes so much to swallow that emotion... whatever name we try to tag onto it. Desperation, pride, that completely crushing vice of emotion that hurts so much to pull yourself away with... I understand this way too well and was utterly wrenching. "
Posted by Guillotine on "Where the Weeds End" by johntaiyu
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