Literal Nirvana

By johntaiyu

I wonder
if the feeling a man gets
right at the point
of penetration

is as good
as the feeling
a woman gets
when he sticks it in her?

There's a glazed look
that washes across
her face
when she's taken

that seems
like literal
nirvana,

her eyes
fog over
and her lips part
as she swallows
the moment

before arching up
and melting into
the pillows and blankets

in sweaty passionate sticky communion.

It gets me hard
just thinking about it.

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© 2007 johntaiyu
Published on Wednesday, June 20, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: got me wet

  • A former member wrote: wow. damn.

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Probably not. We get the dry uncomfortable side of the condom. This is best thing I've read all day. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: a stark contrast to the last i read of yours, but nevertheless truthful; and i have always wondered the opposite of men.. . if it is more 'surreal/felt/velvety' on your end of the bargain?....deftly written tho ..ness

  • elisa On Friday, June 22, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    such a passionate pondering ........ you penetrate with words.

  • cemetarydance On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, cemetarydance (21)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmm.damn that was a good write and right to the point loved every bit of it.

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Love it! When she really wants you this is exactly what it's like. Top draw! -Carl

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    "as she swallows the moment." this was sexy, seductive but not over done. I enjoyed all of it.

  • blue On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ha! I know this, I know this well. Well spoken. ~b

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