Comments by All Members
- "This is very different than most things I've read, on this subject. Quite an interesting approach. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "crave it" by weyvern
- "I agree with Guillotine. The repeated rhyme seemed forced at first, but in the end it came together nicely. Well done. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Warrior syndrome" by weyvern
- "The last stanza imporved the overall image of this poem, at first I wasnt sure where it was going but you wrested my interest back which is a rare thing. Looking firward to seeing more from you."
Posted by Guillotine on "Warrior syndrome" by weyvern
- ""Death...What care has it for decisions that you
Make, or how each fowl, little mortal copes" is my fave line 'cause it cares not for how each mortal behaves in life....it takes all equally...I liked..."
Posted by Vexed on "Death Is An Art Like Anything Else Done Well" by weyvern
- "Would seem to make sense, but what of The Art of Life? Should we settle on the "bland, vile little ways and wonders"? I hear what you're saying, but there is alot more to it methinks. Still, this read well, a fine display of verse. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Death Is An Art Like Anything Else Done Well" by weyvern
- "this is good work and I know how you feel and where the more and more leads....glad you're doing what you're doing feel free to email me if you need to talk....good write!!"
Posted by Myrrhkuri the fallen one on "crave it" by weyvern
- "Oh god how i know that feeling... i havent in years but every once in a while the craving comes back. Oh man.. i know what you mean. Ive written a poem or two on it as well actually. good one, i liked this,~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "crave it" by weyvern
- "hmmmm...interesting perspective to a common topic...this definately left me thinking. Nicely done. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "crave it" by weyvern
- "It's exactly how almost every woman on the planet feels. It's nice to know I'm not the only one not liking what I see staring back at me. Great piece!!!"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "mirror, mirror" by weyvern
- "ahh shite! it's suppost to be "entranced" not enhanced and it wont let me change it noooooooo
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Posted by weyvern on "Broken hero" by weyvern
- "And on another sidenote completely unconnected to the previous posts... I read in your profile that you love Anne Rice!!!! She is a goddess and probably my favorite writer. I have read the whole Vampire Chronicles twice each. You have great taste as we"
Posted by Unknown on "watcher" by weyvern
- "I had to comment on this one again hehe, sorry... You are simply fantastic. ~Lost~"
Posted by Unknown on "watcher" by weyvern
- "Wow... I didn't see this slap in the face at all!!! I really like this for many reasons..this may be my favorite of yours. ~Lost~"
Posted by Unknown on "amoungst the blessed" by weyvern
- "I agree with veingo. I think you have lots of potential..not that you aren't good right now, but keep on and I think you will amaze even yourself = ) ~Lost~"
Posted by Unknown on "Broken hero" by weyvern
- "Hell yes...this is awesome. Short, sweet, to-the-point. Your word choice is perfect for this piece, excellent write. ~Lost~"
Posted by Unknown on "watcher" by weyvern
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