watcher

By weyvern

bloodstained tear drops
tear streaked war wounds
torn to peices
by peices lost

soft earth marked by
his footsteps soft
restfull watcher
watch me resting

fear, pain, madness
mad from the pain
do you see this
seer of all

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© 2005 weyvern
Published on Friday, December 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • manywalks On Friday, February 24, 2006, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Mmmmm, such sweet perfection finely ccrafted. ~ mw

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 5, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    This is short but oh so good! Great write.

  • A former member wrote: -ll ( damn comment limits ). ~Lost~

  • A former member wrote: And on another sidenote completely unconnected to the previous posts... I read in your profile that you love Anne Rice!!!! She is a goddess and probably my favorite writer. I have read the whole Vampire Chronicles twice each. You have great taste as we

  • A former member wrote: I had to comment on this one again hehe, sorry... You are simply fantastic. ~Lost~

  • A former member wrote: Hell yes...this is awesome. Short, sweet, to-the-point. Your word choice is perfect for this piece, excellent write. ~Lost~

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