mirror, mirror

By weyvern

Rain down on my sore bones
The gift i have long awated
See the otherside of the photograph
let me out so i can get in
My life an oximoron, a stated
contradiction as i see her laugh
on the otherside of the mirror
to get my hands on my counterpart
crazy little obsession, to an undated
time i run towards the pain
the blade that draggs me through
the other world of light and dark
deep inside i know i'm fated
to be stuck forever on this path
i still fight
i know its right
ignore her plight
squeese it tight
the flooding light
is nothing now... its...

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© 2005 weyvern
Published on Tuesday, December 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I loved this. great job.

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 5, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    It's exactly how almost every woman on the planet feels. It's nice to know I'm not the only one not liking what I see staring back at me. Great piece!!!

  • dead_inside On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, dead_inside (32)By person wrote:

    clever but spooky, what if we are the mirror image

  • A former member wrote: damn nicely done

  • stuart_pid On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    yeah, i liked this. seemed to chug along like a freight train of hopelessness. nice write.

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    interesting poem....we will talk soon!

  • A former member wrote: hmmmmm...this is definitely an interesting perspective...the idea that you are chasing your mirror image...very well done. *Evangel*

  • blue On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    echoes* ..interesting indeed. Welcome to DP. ~b

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