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Broken hero
By weyvern
You await your chance
To prove yourself at last
The one you try to enhance
You know that it wont last
You still fight on forever
For that unending blissful feeling
The more you try to love her
The less love and affection your receiving
To finish it all in one strike
You are severed, torn from within
Please don’t grieve my broken hero
You are close to your loyal heroin
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© 2005 weyvern
Comments on "Broken hero"
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On Monday, January 2, 2006, weyvern
(80)
wrote:
ahh shite! it's suppost to be "entranced" not enhanced and it wont let me change it noooooooo
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A former member wrote:
I agree with veingo. I think you have lots of potential..not that you aren't good right now, but keep on and I think you will amaze even yourself = ) ~Lost~
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, drop dead des
(7) wrote:
I love this one. I know the story all too well.
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Oh, I love it. You've said so much, so quickly, and easily. ^V^
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94) wrote:
this is very cool I like it alot..
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A former member wrote:
omfgits brilliant i really want to know where you get your inspiration from its amazing
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A former member wrote:
damn... i like that....its really good
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
please tell me what you think of my work i dont mind negative comments i need to know in order to progress
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