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Detached
By weyvern
I’ll try to help you though I’m helpless
You need my comfort, solace
I need to give you love; loveless
Though I am and detached.
Oh, once I felt the warmth you radiate,
I shone through the darkness
I gave you love, hell I’d settle for hate
I cant feel, cant give detached.
You have gone, so what, who cares
I’m stuck, stranded and alone,
I’m wasting away in broken stares
Cant love myself, nor you, I’m detached
Cant hate myself though you do
I cant hate you I just rot
Away with the years I cant undo
Where I beat out myself, became
Detached…
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© 2005 weyvern
Comments on "Detached"
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On Thursday, January 5, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94)
wrote:
touching piece.
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
This really hit home. It's as if you're writing about me. ^V^
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
painfully pointed and incisive, nice work. ~b
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A former member wrote:
i see me in your writting and it hurts but opens my eyes
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