Comments by All Members
- "This is beautiful. Not travesties, but truths in the face of travesties are dreams, hope and wished...the poet must write, must speak, must sing - it is a responsibility...I for one am glad you do..."
Posted by Solace on "Dreaming from the window sill" by LordBrosnian
- "A definite well worth Romantic conclusion - not overdone - not smothered by itself, but simply evocative and honestly expressed. Not to mention something dear to my own heart..."
Posted by Solace on "Dreamscape trifecta" by LordBrosnian
- ""Like god's tribunal eye which never winks!" A timeless piece of brilliance, the lovers lost, and only the eye of god to connect them - it becomes his shame...haunts him in his sleep...brilliant"
Posted by Solace on "The eye of god" by LordBrosnian
- "Odysseus suffered the loss and slaughter of almost all he loved, he came to become nothing at all - from that position he theb shone like a star from the darkness and like a star remained - beautiful..."
Posted by Solace on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "This is a fantastic piece, from start to finish unhalting brilliance - it flows rhythmically and solidly without rest, without refrain. I can not agree with the sentiment, but I can admire the poem its force and feeling"
Posted by Solace on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "This has a definite style, an amalgam of pensive rhythm, of wistful style and of nostalgic settings...what bursts from the page is the feeling, is an urging to connect with the piece...and yet it seems a slight limited, a slight unfinished..."
Posted by Solace on "Never Again" by LordBrosnian
- "Dear god I've taken a liking already I've fallen into the twirling vortex of the words; they lapped and weaved into my heart stealing all that of humanity I had left ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "My Brothers" by LordBrosnian
- "Once again, I smell poe. This one reminds me of "a city by the sea" While I usually don't get into the older influenced poetry, you did it right. And even more, I usually avoid structured pieces. But when it's done with such charisma, it's hard to ign"
Posted by Alanarchy on "Madness of the Seven" by LordBrosnian
- "Truly amazing structure. Great word, that just reaks of eddie poe. Reminds me of "To Helen" and for some reason "the vampire, lestat" Write the holy hell on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "A Tale of my destruction" by LordBrosnian
- "if not to watch the heart you wish to hold back against the corner. sit there and stare in fear, afraid to share the most powerful thing there is ... but from past heart breaks and un felt love they know of nothing better"
Posted by Cattarax on "In presence of your light ( I wilt)" by LordBrosnian
- "Scares and forgotten memories are the things that make us what we are now ... unfortunatly it is all the bad , vicious and some times most depressing things that we remember"
Posted by Cattarax on "A childhood - Forgotten" by LordBrosnian
- "the love in this poem was blindingly apparent and thoughtfully defined..many can relate to the fierce search highlighted in these words, defined by your persona. i adored this..it's so gorgeous. ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "Before you pledge your love to me" by LordBrosnian
- ""This poet's dreams shall never be subdued by any girl But if you wish to thole thro ev'ry whim I'd now allow you to bequeath those words which I've cut short"- brilliant picture of your expectations, and how they will fall no short of what you want.."
Posted by Unknown on "Before you pledge your love to me" by LordBrosnian
- "This reminded me of something an 18th century poet would write..back in the days when chivalry was not dead, when expecatations were pure..this was such a mind-etching poem, written my the stars almost in it's ethereal quality.."
Posted by Unknown on "Before you pledge your love to me" by LordBrosnian
- "such complex beauty for a simple girl......a tight grasp of lingual perfection......i can't say enough about this....i am completely enthralled."
Posted by elisa on "Ode to the simple girl" by LordBrosnian
- "Poised&steady 'til tumultuous end. Near-overwhelming flow. Winding and flawless. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Mire" by LordBrosnian
- "the rhyming seemed so natural...i like the way you structured the poem, so it actually flows with the words. "
Posted by dying angel on "The Mire" by LordBrosnian
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