Never Again

By LordBrosnian

How weak a heart I often think must lay within my chest

...A fleshy palm with only thumb and ring

Its missing parts proclaim it nil still rotting in my breast

...And only spare one love on which to cling

Quakey and bewildered but a boy of seventeen

...Fell ill beneath the vexes of a queen

And long beyond the point of fingers parting from their nails

With fervor I clenched hard upon that dream...

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© 2005 LordBrosnian
Published on Monday, December 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow, you write beautifully I wish I could master the flow of my poetry as you have done.

  • AHHH On Saturday, July 28, 2007, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    that's awesome.

  • torn_beauty On Monday, February 12, 2007, torn_beauty (77)By person wrote:

    you have an easy flow and a unique style i really like. i will have to read alot more of your work!

  • Solace On Friday, August 11, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    This has a definite style, an amalgam of pensive rhythm, of wistful style and of nostalgic settings...what bursts from the page is the feeling, is an urging to connect with the piece...and yet it seems a slight limited, a slight unfinished...

  • Shewolf On Friday, December 30, 2005, Shewolf (25)By person wrote:

    Awesome.......Shewolf

  • BeautifulCalamity On Monday, December 19, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    the flow is beautiful. the words are pain-laced pulsing of my heart...and out your pen. truly lovely.

  • K_Love On Thursday, December 15, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed your style, it is quite different than others I have read. A very beautiful and image forming piece you've created. Wonderful work.

  • A former member wrote: Oh my.. a heart-throbbing reflection..tinged with sighs of regrettal.. I rather enjoyed the self-removed perspective.. it touched on the idea of dreaming effectively.. well done.

  • A former member wrote: A really nice feel to this, like a lesson learned, escape of innocence.

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