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Never Again
By LordBrosnian
How weak a heart I often think must lay within my chest
...A fleshy palm with only thumb and ring
Its missing parts proclaim it nil still rotting in my breast
...And only spare one love on which to cling
Quakey and bewildered but a boy of seventeen
...Fell ill beneath the vexes of a queen
And long beyond the point of fingers parting from their nails
With fervor I clenched hard upon that dream...
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© 2005 LordBrosnian
Published on Monday, December 12, 2005.
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Comments on "Never Again"
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A former member wrote:
wow, you write beautifully I wish I could master the flow of my poetry as you have done.
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On Saturday, July 28, 2007, AHHH
(187)
wrote:
that's awesome.
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On Monday, February 12, 2007, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
you have an easy flow and a unique style i really like. i will have to read alot more of your work!
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On Friday, August 11, 2006, Solace
(1069) wrote:
This has a definite style, an amalgam of pensive rhythm, of wistful style and of nostalgic settings...what bursts from the page is the feeling, is an urging to connect with the piece...and yet it seems a slight limited, a slight unfinished...
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On Friday, December 30, 2005, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
Awesome.......Shewolf
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On Monday, December 19, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
the flow is beautiful. the words are pain-laced pulsing of my heart...and out your pen. truly lovely.
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On Thursday, December 15, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I enjoyed your style, it is quite different than others I have read. A very beautiful and image forming piece you've created. Wonderful work.
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A former member wrote:
Oh my.. a heart-throbbing reflection..tinged with sighs of regrettal.. I rather enjoyed the self-removed perspective.. it touched on the idea of dreaming effectively.. well done.
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A former member wrote:
A really nice feel to this, like a lesson learned, escape of innocence.
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