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- ""cause lately ive been missing everything i gave up"...as have I...this was stated with such regret, and such longing to make things right...and I do hope that things work out right for you. Another wonderful piece. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "spinning apologies" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "Dang! So much doubt mixed with so much hope is a thing I feel all too often. I hope that things work out well for you. This is beautifully reminding...and I thank you for dredging up my memories. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "id like you to know" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "*so i'll fly eyeless with my retracting wings
humming into pink (and black clouds* I've got all my pieces. Trying to make them fit together seems to be trickier. This was just amazing. Keep it up.
"
Posted by Alanarchy on "the glow of a faceless soul" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "Yes, Dying_Angel commented on the same line I was just about to comment on...and I agree with you, there aren't enough band-aids to cover a wound such as this...I only wish there were, but band-aids can't fix broken hearts. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "not enough band-aids" by AnotherWitheredRose
- ""
todays a new day- i repeat-
(hoping to be convinced)
knowing its really yesterdays twin"..."and i know that no matter how far i walk
it wont be far enough away because...
i cant leave myself behind" goodness darling...."
Posted by dying angel on "not enough band-aids" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "So I log on to darkpoetry and start reading. Maybe it is just the right momen...but your first couple lines...they just. I don't want to die and Im not saying I'm dead....I just want to dissapear or find my door to...where I should be."
Posted by Unknown on "(There's no place like No-where)" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "I've been sitting here for about a while now, on the verge of tears. Just staring at a black screen. Because I know, in my heart, that i don't belong here. That this world of broken bodies and dying earth is not actually here. "
Posted by Unknown on "(There's no place like No-where)" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "great job. I've never had therapy before but this reminds me of the conversations i sometimes get into with friends and family. they come at you with answers that have no bearing to the situation your in. great write."
Posted by RepulsiveAttraction on "gotta love therapy" by AnotherWitheredRose
- ""i sent you my dreams in a paper plane
but i think it crashed somewhere
behind the mountains of reality"- woah. this was harsh, in the most beautiful way. the images you used to paint this were breathtaking. absolutely wow."
Posted by Unknown on "a skeletons path" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "Holy...alright, that's it. *falls to her knees and clutches at your hand* My Lord, sing to me a tune of destruction again. My ears long to hear your every word. This...just...woah. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "a skeletons path" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "woah...This spun me for a loop of wonder and awe...this is so very amazing...I agree with paperflowers...this was meaningful. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "damaged" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "God damn..."but perhaps, maybe/my imperfections are perfect/and beauty lies" You've caught me in your net of words...don't you dare release me anytime soon. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "i let myself" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "pissed off ranting with style, to say the least, and meaningful to me, though i dare not claim to know exactly where you are coming from; its a really good write in its brutal honesty, description and detail."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "damaged" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "i love the end line, i love it all... i have been choking on stars and now i want to be numb, it just shows how different the perspective of some can be, yet they can relate still. Amazing choice of words, variety of structure, i cannot fault it!"
Posted by Unknown on "choking on stars" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "God damn...why the hell has no one else commented? *Shakes head* Well, I am going to! This piece...it took me by the throat and held me under the river of your words...this is painfully lovely...wonderful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "*(just don't forget)*" by AnotherWitheredRose
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