Comments by All Members
- "oh i though oregon was a new shape like a triangle or something.
still very beautiful though"
Posted by Unknown on "oregon" by coly
- "oh grrr! I want to be there!!!! So beautiful. ~b"
Posted by blue on "oregon" by coly
- "This was rough, and that just gave it real world momentum. Those last two or three lines were heartbreakers. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "your up your down" by coly
- "hmmm... this seemed like a mix between two poems. That would also make it fitting that the other idea have a title, if that's the case. An inspiring poem, coly."
Posted by A poet of madness on "your up your down" by coly
- "hmm....i don't remember asking for a consensus among the other members."
Posted by elisa on "im screwed" by coly
- "...like staring down the spiral of a blackhole..... rarely understood.........raw words....i like."
Posted by elisa on "im screwed" by coly
- "thats sweet you are very kind:)"
Posted by Unknown on "DP" by coly
- "I don't know what I can say to this... It hurts to know that shit like this even happens... *whispers* I'm sorry."
Posted by Nail Bunny on "my mommys fucked" by coly
- "wow.. emotion is a key thing in this poem and you have it.. you dont want to let go, its so good.. and yet deep inside its so confusing.. good write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "scared" by coly
- "add me among the people with open arms if you should need someone. other than that, i don't have anything i feel is good enough to say for this, other than better days to you."
Posted by MESUN on "shes gonna kill herself" by coly
- "Na. Now if Matt started sending me free booze, then maybe."
Posted by Six-Out on "DP" by coly
- "True. DarkPoetry really is the perfect society all of us have been looking for. :) "
Posted by NeroMatches on "DP" by coly
- "I feel the pain for whitch you speak and I am truly sorry for this pain, same goes for me, my mother is always on a twick so I lived all my life alone, I am once again sorry for you pain, I like your work alot keep up the good writes"
Posted by Unknown on "shes gonna kill herself" by coly
- "dude, that sucks. that's one of the few things i'm glad to say i haven't had to deal with, but if ya need somebody to talk to, ya can always dpmail or email me. ya got my yahoo address, which is also the only email i check on a regular basis."
Posted by A poet of madness on "shes gonna kill herself" by coly
- "My mother had some of the same qualities.. unfortunately, she's not here now.. all I can say is try to rationalize with her, and if you can't do that.. tell someone who could do something to help her.."
Posted by Unknown on "shes gonna kill herself" by coly
- "I know how this feels 100%.... I loved a girl once but she turned her back and I was hurt that I wouldn't get to spend the rest of my life with her"
Posted by Unknown on "scared" by coly
- "I'm sorry..... But dying angel is right... it's easier to move one once you've accepted it.... but you should never forget the one you've lost"
Posted by Unknown on "death of a loved one" by coly
- "...or empty...it gets easier once you adapt and accept it. although i know better than anyone that its not something we want to accept. sometimes we have to becuase theres nothing more you can do
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Posted by dying angel on "death of a loved one" by coly
- "i lost someone very close to me and til this day it feels as if something inside me is missing. im not saying it doesnt get better, becuase it does. althought ull always feel that something isnt right, "
Posted by dying angel on "death of a loved one" by coly
- ""everyday I see you but your an untouchable dream"...*tears* i literally have tears streaming down my face. you opened up my feelings that i tend to keep locked away. "
Posted by dying angel on "death of a loved one" by coly
- "I like this - the indecisionof love is apparent throughout but the longing for something more combined makes this poem more "real" - tangable - good write... and dont be scared, everything works itself out in the end."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "scared" by coly
- "that sucks, i'm so sorry, just be strong i know it's gonna hurt but you still have to keep trying"
Posted by Unknown on "my mommys fucked" by coly
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