Comments by All Members
- "Outstanding metaphor here, and the underlayers in that concluding stanza are fantastic. As is, of course, your astonishingly strong command of metre within story. I think nobody here does rhyme better."
Posted by purr_verse on "e/E" by Godot
- "this is a breathtaking poem that truly speaks to the depths of the souls of anyone who ever this kind of deep loss...wow! fav. list! ::truth::"
Posted by Unknown on "Ana" by Godot
- "Agree completely. I have not seen metred poetry done better; this is as tight as Poe, Tennyson, Eliot. Just magnificent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Touched" by Godot
- "It's a beautiful rough draft goes nicely. My heart hurts because you've explained me so well. I also agree it is not finished yet, but well done. I love it much much. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Stoics and Stars, Scars and Scope" by Godot
- "i agree in full with steuss...couldn't have said it better. "
Posted by sIo on "Touched" by Godot
- ""And here I leave those better days in songs and photographs,
As she carves my trifling name into her girlhood epitaphs." I love the complexity of this rhyming poem.. most I read are fairly simple but this was wonderful. Great lines in this.. Loved the "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Stoics and Stars, Scars and Scope" by Godot
- "so incredible . . I can never, ever tire of reading you. You own rhyme."
Posted by cre on "Ana" by Godot
- "this is pretty damn awesome...impeccable and incredible well executed flow. the last stanza ripped me to pieces...i also loved: "Gives herself in body to a boy as she misleads him,
Her heart betrothed to someone else whose decadence precedes him ""
Posted by Twilight on "Stoics and Stars, Scars and Scope" by Godot
- "Stuart is right..Your works are so fluid that it seems as though you write them effortlessly. I love your conclusions; they r always perfect and satisfying. ~Faerie~"
Posted by Naked_Faerie on "Christmas, An Apology" by Godot
- "I'm usually so refined when leaving comments but your work just makes me want to scream profanities!!!! I can easily lose myself in your work...~Faerie~"
Posted by Naked_Faerie on "Baltimore" by Godot
- "i wonder if you're still around godot. i love all of your work, particularly this one. struggled with a similar poem once but i couldnt find the words. you make it look easy."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Christmas, An Apology" by Godot
- "Not only dose your meaning come accross clearly but you use such beauty in everything you write, weather it be gorish or otherwise it just comes out beautifully. *hott* "
Posted by icyhott on "Stoics and Stars, Scars and Scope" by Godot
- "Indeed a well written poem this was. The ending.. superb. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Ana" by Godot
- "sheer rhyme and metre mastery, the point never forced or lost... magnificently well-executed piece that succeeds on every level. outstanding write."
Posted by purr_verse on "Ana" by Godot
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