Two from Brazen Haiku

the absurdity
of seven syllables, rum
and fifty degrees

smoke two cigarettes
like smeared-chalk cloud skies trailing
college boy's spent days

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Published on Sunday, October 27, 2002. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Two from Brazen Haiku"

On Thursday, May 20, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156) wrote:

Very Interesting Haiku's Here. Haiku's Are Cool. They Make Me Fuzzy On The Inside. Carry On. GPhD.
On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Demosthenes (155) wrote:

i love the way you word things... even if i dont quite catch whats going on, i know its pretty. -B
On Sunday, June 15, 2003, hate_doll (263) wrote:

hmm...I like the second one a lot...very cool...(!)
On Thursday, May 22, 2003, Saint_Reaper (200) wrote:

.....good..........!!!
On Friday, May 16, 2003, FallenSky (42) wrote:

i haven't seen anything of yours for a while now, this is a very nice intertwining of syllables ~CFS