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Two from Brazen Haiku
By Godot
the absurdity
of seven syllables, rum
and fifty degrees
smoke two cigarettes
like smeared-chalk cloud skies trailing
college boy's spent days
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Published on Sunday, October 27, 2002.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Two from Brazen Haiku"
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156)
wrote:
Very Interesting Haiku's Here. Haiku's Are Cool. They Make Me Fuzzy On The Inside. Carry On. GPhD.
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
i love the way you word things... even if i dont quite catch whats going on, i know its pretty. -B
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On Sunday, June 15, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
hmm...I like the second one a lot...very cool...(!)
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On Thursday, May 22, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
.....good..........!!!
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
i haven't seen anything of yours for a while now, this is a very nice intertwining of syllables ~CFS
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