Comments by All Members
- "i really like it. . it is diffrent from the cutting sad poems i have read all day. . very nice"
Posted by Unknown on "e/E" by Godot
- "indeed excellent.... remnants of Poe, i think. and although this has a feeling of utter hopelessness to it... i am left feeling almost... comforted..."
Posted by Sky Singer on "Ana" by Godot
- ""who hurt you for all the right reasons" are there right reasons...?
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Posted by Audrey_Star on "Touched" by Godot
- "excellent piece. surprised it hasn't received more comments..."
Posted by Unknown on "Ana" by Godot
- "I like the way you write this and the way it flows, almost reminds me of Poe."
Posted by Unknown on "Touched" by Godot
- "that can burn or bring such comfort... and the feeling fades, with the rising of the day... she drifts back into dreams, and the necessities of life, familiar like a mother hold you over until the next"
Posted by Jonas on "The Fluid of My Industry" by Godot
- "of the gritty time when she is behind you but you are not so blind and she is not so buried that in dreams thoughts can carry like current through copper and rouse the fire "
Posted by Jonas on "The Fluid of My Industry" by Godot
- "the last four lines are great. solid piece throughout. maybe drop the title as the first line... seeing it twice is.. unnecessary."
Posted by Unknown on "The Fluid of My Industry" by Godot
- "great example of making much ado about nothing...i did however enjoy it...nice job"
Posted by muckraker on "e/E" by Godot
- "This is pure drama spun from the dust of dreamscape expressionistic minimalism, cut and scratched w/ the blades of existentialism...beautiful allegories. This is a splendid read; an introspective slide out from the subconcious vs. the concious."
Posted by Unknown on "Equilibrium" by Godot
- "You never fail to amaze me. It should be nice to create memories with you, and then have you put them on a paper. I can't grow tired of reading this one! Velvet."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "Baltimore" by Godot
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