One's Self As Determined by Circumstances Taken Out of Context
By Godot
One's Self As Determined by Circumstances Taken Out of Context
Ell drafted a paper
Though drunk, got a B minus
Dibrell proved God's existence
By quoting Saint Aquinas
Handi got ripped off
In a bit of sketchy dealing
While Josh was going emo
Since he loves to hate this feeling
Gary said that soda here
Is rather overpriced
Liz lost her virginity
Alexa has found Christ
Chris went to the Salvo
Where he bought a couple shirts
Adelaide said in a dream
"I know how much this hurts"
Sanford formed a punk band
With Paul playing the drums
Katie baked an apple pie
Now all that's left is crumbs
Levi broke his own guitar
Laura looked quite stressed
Logan got off speed at last
And Morgan's still depressed
Mike from up the hall
Smokes his ganja by the ounce
Sells in Pennsylvania
In rather large amounts
Sara down in ResLife
Caused the dorm some tension
She found out about Tim
And had an intervention
Tim said alcoholics
Are those who still deny
The lifestyle they live:
"I'll drink until I die"
Grace looked so endearing
As she listened to the lecture
Tessa touched a mural
To admire its rough texture
Awards
Comments on "One's Self As Determined by Circumstances Taken Out of Context"
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On Monday, June 26, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Great words , all relevated to me . I know all these people though we never met .
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant. I wasn't sure quite what to expect when I read the title, but your easy rhyming style deftly sidestepped my uncertainty.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2008, demonicus
(26) wrote:
I am absolutely speechless
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
this is fascinating. it reminds me of Edward Gorey.
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On Monday, September 15, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
This is great, great stuff Godot. I truly wish you would make your way back to post some more. You've got such an awesome perspective in your writing.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
thats great, i love things i dont understand sometimes... not sure why, but kudos to you. -B
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A former member wrote:
First, the title itself reads like
an existentialistic painting,
as if Dali were using the words of Beckett w/ a brush.
And yes, the poem is a masterpiece.
I truely admire this style of writing...
"Liz lost her virginity
Alexa has found Christ"
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A former member wrote:
"Vladimir cut his hand on hot mirror
Estragon dropped his ball off cold sun
Rosencrantz slapped the face of dark angel
While Guildenstern ran from his sketched reflection w/ a gun."
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A former member wrote:
That was awesome!!
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
the rhyme's of life. where's tuti?