Comments by All Members
- "You did a really great job of using metaphor to describe one's inner conflict and how crushing those feelings can be. I like that you ended this by escaping the storm. And like you said these things come again but at least you'll know you have conquered those storms before. Very nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Puffy Cloudys" by Wren
- ""The night fell before I noticed
It was hanging by a thread
We didn't see it coming
It just happened in my head" Great lines!"
Posted by Dismalmind on "Knight In Shining Amour" by Wren
- "Really super good!! Has a steadfast beat to it."
Posted by Unknown on "11:30" by Wren
- "How perfectly simple and it feigns age so well. Gentle and pretty."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The One" by Wren
- "I appreciate short poems more then long ones. The ability to show as much emotion, as you did, in a short poem, is something incandescantly wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "Beachy Nights" by Wren
- "It's Amazing How The Truth Of Things Seem To Always Be In Between! This Was Simple Yet Very Effective! Surprised It's Been Four Years Since Last Comment! Great Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Waiting" by Wren
- "hahahahahaha this was excellent! excellent rhyming skills but the "technique" is even better hahaha i enjoyed this. ~michelle"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Hour Of Pleasure" by Wren
- "Amazing flow thoughout this piece. I'm awed by its natural flow and rhyme. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Blood Lust " by Wren
- "I'm wondering what the symbolism in being found is...what did you find? what found you? that keeps your feet on the the ground..."
Posted by Solace on "Lost and Found" by Wren
- "Wow that was cool....that was wonderful..if I could I would favorite it..~GoNe~"
Posted by Cwn Annwn on "Blood Lust " by Wren
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