Beachy Nights

By Wren

Brown sand
Blue sea
Pink and purple sky
Shells of beige and white
Like thunder is the water crashing
Waves tall like mountains
Sounds of seagulls above me
Sun is orange and red like fire
The fire burns out when touched by sea
Stars sparkle
The moon is round and glowing
Cool breeze
Sky is deep blue
Sea is even darker..
Night has fallen
I'am home..

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Copyright 2003 Wren
Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I appreciate short poems more then long ones. The ability to show as much emotion, as you did, in a short poem, is something incandescantly wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: The use of colours helped create a beautiful image here ..ty for sharing

  • blackdarkness On Monday, July 19, 2004, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    i like the use of colors...makes it sound like a picture

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Beautiful poem! Keep up the good work!

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