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Puffy Cloudys
By Wren
Puffy clouds and all their glory
Thunder cloud's a different story
Puffy clouds all white and..puffy...
Rainy days make my nose stuffy
Thunder clouds bring rain and lightning
Thinking about it, my chest is tightening
Sometimes rain can lead to hail
Try to make it stop, but to no
avail
The skies are crashing
Noisy mess
But soon I will find happiness
The Thunder Clouds will fade away
To ruin me another
day
Puffy Clouds fill the sky
again
Rain will come back, but until then...
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Copyright 2003 Wren
Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 9, 2018, Dilated View
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wrote:
You did a really great job of using metaphor to describe one's inner conflict and how crushing those feelings can be. I like that you ended this by escaping the storm. And like you said these things come again but at least you'll know you have conquered those storms before. Very nicely done :)
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Profound. Very relatable. Great write. JD
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A former member wrote:
Until then...
I love the suspense.
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A former member wrote:
This is fun, and I can really relate.
~Bunny
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Very good piece! Nice rhythm! Keep up the good work!!!
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