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Liquid Bubbles
By Wren
Liquid Bubbles in my head
Telling me you should be dead
Liquid Bubbles they are red
Rainbows, Gremlins, they all said,
"Come with us, we'll keep you fed! Kill them all and then be wed! The Prince!
The Prince! Kill Prince Ned!"
"He hates us all! He shuns our name! We'll never catch our chance at fame!"
To be famous, we all wish.
To be famous, just like this.
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Copyright 2003 Wren
Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Liquid Bubbles"
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
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wrote:
*claps*
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A former member wrote:
So hard to make an original comment.. Whatever. I love this! You would listen to the bubbles, I know it.
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A former member wrote:
"who's Zed? Zed is dead." Who's Ned? Kill him anyway. "Liquid Bubbles they are red," and sometimes blue. This was a fun little read.
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
This reads very nicely out loud. One of my favorite things to do is to read Edgar Allan Poe out loud because of the way the words sing and dance on your tongue. Reading this reminded me of his work. Doesn't get better than that for me.
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On Monday, April 14, 2003, Wren
(34) wrote:
That means so much that I reminded you of Poe's work! He is one of my idols! Thank you!
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
I like this. Very unique! Keep writing!
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