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- "i think you write with a quill ripped from an angel's wings. this piece reminds me of this thing i read one time. i think it's called My Paintbrush. if i remember correct it had the same idea of covering up to hide. excellence."
Posted by MESUN on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
- "damn it, god fucking damn it. you, you pierce my heart with the things i already know but am to afraid to keep telling myself. or are you just saying the things every one keeps tucked away, silent and gagged, in the backs of their minds?"
Posted by MESUN on "Patience- A Virtue Unwanted" by Err0r
- "have to take them, we must make them ours. we come with nothing we leave with nothing. that is the natural state. nothing. we then are obligated to go against the way we are created to obtain all we desire. i guess..."
Posted by MESUN on "Layer 01 Journal Karma Or Fate?" by Err0r
- "if we could have all the things we wanted, we would want nothing. so i don't feel we are in places where we are just predetermined not to have what we want, it's just that the things we want that are worth having will not, and can not be given to us. we h"
Posted by MESUN on "Layer 01 Journal Karma Or Fate?" by Err0r
- "that sure is a different take on the idea of what we would be without our words. i feel confident in saying if i didn't release my demons i wouldn't have been the only one that went away in a pine box."
Posted by MESUN on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
- "damn that was heavy. (who says that?) any way, you're quite the role model for a self proclaimed deviant. hee hee hee, it's all good."
Posted by MESUN on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "last night i heard the very words from my father that i have longed to hear from anyone, and they have changed me, because of that i have more understanding for the last line than ever before."
Posted by MESUN on "Maybe [The End]" by Err0r
- "only you can make me hate my dreams. the happy dreams i have which i cling to for fear of the real world. only because they are dreams. but, i remember that they are mine. no one can take them away. enjoy your sleep."
Posted by MESUN on "Sweet Dreams" by Err0r
- "i don't read you enough like i use to. you never fail to impress me. i hope to talk to you again. your art lets me see inside you, and you are beautiful throughout. blessings to you my friend."
Posted by MESUN on "Here" by Err0r
- "short... somehow slightly minimalist yet still a deathgrasp (however much an antithesis the term creates) upon emotion, love and longing of a human heart. A deserving dedication and memoir. I'm glad I read this."
Posted by Guillotine on "Here" by Err0r
- "the poetic dialect between 'you' and 'I' ..... .... i get lost in the 'what if' of this reality..... nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "Here" by Err0r
- "That was so sweet. The ending was beautiful; fantasy really is a great thing to make reality. Usually I don't like repeated words, but you pulled it off nicely. I was smiling as I got to the end of it. Hopefully this gets the reviews it deserves. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Here" by Err0r
- "I loved your use of the word 'here'. I agree that there is a romantic feel to this piece, but the ending still leaves that realistic grip. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Here" by Err0r
- "Your words simply drift me off into a world of beauty and hope, where dreams are the reality of life.. You've painted a beautiful picture across my eyes, and for that I thank you. "
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Here" by Err0r
- "Imagination is something worth worshiping when one has it, but is also able to use it like you do here! This is amongst the best I've ever read here! Wonderful!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Here" by Err0r
- "This got me all dreamy and smiling :) I love your romantic view of life. I find myself dreaming of a Here and an Us too :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Here" by Err0r
- "*sigh* with each stanza, your imagery grows more beautiful. I especially LOVE the way you ended this...you blow me away, darling. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Here" by Err0r
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