Sweet Dreams

By Err0r


She's the girl I see when I fall asleep.
Welcoming me into this image of slumber.
Such perfection of beauty could only be
That of a dream.

Sleeping for happiness
My eyes would meet with hers
And our hearts would float over our lips
Touching and beating against one another.

Fluffy clouds would carry us away together
And the sandman would lend me his sandbag.
Because you've caused me to willingly leap
Into your love comatose.

Unfortunately all good things must come to an end
And illusions can't last forever, but
I'm giving away half of my life
So that every night
I can kiss the girl,
The only one
who understands.

[Please don't wake me up, I'm dreaming of someone special right now...]



[For Erica]

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© 2007 Err0r
Published on Sunday, August 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • MESUN On Friday, October 12, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    only you can make me hate my dreams. the happy dreams i have which i cling to for fear of the real world. only because they are dreams. but, i remember that they are mine. no one can take them away. enjoy your sleep.

  • Mistress Shadow On Monday, August 20, 2007, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    Sweet and full of soft emotions. I see pillows and spooning... ~T

  • Mylissa On Monday, August 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    very sweet. :}

  • A former member wrote: So touching

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, August 19, 2007, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    *smiles* Awww... lol. That was so beautiful and intoxicating, I'm left with a feeling of absolute serenity.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, August 19, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Ah..Britt, this was fantabulous dreamscape love..I hope you get to find her in reality :) -Carl

  • Err0r On Sunday, August 19, 2007, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    I did and I've never been happier with her. =)

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, August 19, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Really? *HUGS* That's fucking excellent, Britt :D

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